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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-05-07 06:33 AM


Thoughts

Thought you were the one
but you were not.
You were just someone that
didn't have the right words
to say when my heart
wanted you to stay
in hopes that we could discover
the simple kind of love
that two kindred hearts
might care to uncover.

JamesLee
May07
2002



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1 posted 2002-05-07 06:45 AM


james,

enjoyed it amigo

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2 posted 2002-05-07 08:41 AM




(big hugggssssss) Oh James, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I hope everything is alright, but this is so very true! True love should always be willing to speak up when your heart cries or asks for something and not try to digress or pause to try and think of the right words to say for undetermined amounts of time! (sigh) I know everything will work out in the end as long as you trust what your heart desires and your thoughts, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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3 posted 2002-05-08 06:48 AM



It Would be nice to have a simple love, but it always gets complicated, y'know?   You know!

Dulcinea
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4 posted 2002-05-08 10:28 AM


Those are some very soul searing thoughts to bear, I do hope they don't linger long. Love should be that simple, and words shouldn't be so hard to say...moving piece, very well done.
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-05-08 10:31 AM


James,
That is about as well as any could say it. Enjoyed

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6 posted 2002-05-08 04:59 PM


simply said thoughts....very true...of
a subject that becomes so cottonpicking
complicated and complex...Nice write
James..

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