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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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my winds dream of you my sky is daydream thought your vessel of woman there in the hovering night is my horizon feel my dragon ship ride close your wake my mast, let it rest to you as the necks of steeds when they are meadow mated give me this day my portion of your love and let us crash together on the rocks of our eden let us be splinters there that no god can seperate ©Dark |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and yea be born again in the tides of all creation yea be born again despite the desolation yea... be born again? yea.  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) This is soooooo majestic, sweet friend, yes, yes, may you always embrace your love on Eden's shores and forever feel paradise in every heartbeat! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sere' thank you ms...born again..nah, just good dying there babe noah, thank you amigo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
give me this day my portion of your love and let us crash together on the rocks of our eden let us be splinters there that no god can seperate ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Dark....love this! Good morning~Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
died just fine the first time, didja? *smirk* now...how cool is cool... many grins again, m'friend. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Sounds of reaching shore crashes of cymbals pale |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
feel my dragon ship ride close your wake my mast, let it rest to you as the necks of steeds when they are meadow mated (damn!!) give me this day my portion of your love and let us crash together on the rocks of our eden let us be splinters there that no god can seperate ======================== Yowzers...this kind of splinter hurts sooooo good diggin this one DS. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
enchantress thank you ms, you make me smile too sere' spank you very much..I appreciate you deca, the pale of images, are eros in musical form, thank you janet marie, nuzzlies to your neck skin then...thank you babe for your reads [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (05-08-2002 09:42 AM).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Good Morning...liked this...especially: "as the necks of steeds when they are meadow mated" tossing smile across the valley to you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkStranger~ As always ... you work the imagery to the max~  'let us crash together on the rocks of our eden let us be splinters there' Oh ... I just LOVE it ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
DS~ I love your images and metaphors...and especially your twist of phrase, "as the necks of steeds when they are meadow mated" Lovin' your writing more and more every day.. *hugs* ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too [This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (05-08-2002 12:12 PM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, bless you ms...and thanks for the smile..caught it on the first bounce marge, bless your touches lady fair, thank you so much smittykitty, thanks hon, I appreciate your lady eyes touching |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
When I see your name..I'm never disappointed..this makes me crazy.. Great love stuff and just simply magical in meaning. Sincerely, Reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
regina, if you knew how I enjoy crazy you wouldn't tell me you were.. well maybe..my plane is broke down thanks babe |
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