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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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we were the smooth skin beasts there we wore night on our fur and journeyed with panting hooves we made deft water noise when we ground our desire flesh against shiver sliver knives in the glass room with mirrors where the watchers looked from behind with hands they covered their eyes they touched our sin between peek fingers and applauded our fervor with want prints on sweaty palmed walls they said we were forbidden fruit but asked for our numbers and names so they could capture us in their dreams they begged us to perform as their masters ©Dark |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
incredible. a carny from the outside in... or that is what most people think. touche' |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
serenity..thanks ms...how about ice dancing pairs? lol |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You sure do these poems well. Enjoyed lots. Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Remarkable!... ~Morning Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger Enjoyed the symbolic merry go round. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Enchantress, thank you sweet lady Sandra, slow hugs for your touch, thanks Sy, thank you kind sir... |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
horses madhouse children these are the thoughts you left behind in the dream of dark... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) WOW!!! I too depicted this as some kind of emotional merry-go-round, sweet friend, this is fabulous, I LOVE IT!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) This is a lovely and somewhat haunting verse, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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LRbaba Junior Member
since 2002-05-07
Posts 30Dallas, Texas, |
yeah Dark those are some sultry images likum |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Dark - this one makes me either want to purr or growl...haven't quite made up my mind yet. Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
deca, thank you for the sweet touch ms.. actually just lovers that don't care if anyone is watching..but know they are.. Noah...naughty is all..not bad..thanks my friend LRbaba, a pleasure to have your review and comments, thanks Nightshade..both please...naughty and slow ache thoughts..thank you much |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
DS~ Mmm...steamy. My tea was already hot enough this morning!  I love the title "siftshapes". How nice it would be to throw off the bow-lines and not care for awhile, like this. *hugs* ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
smittykitty... ya just gotta do it.. let it drift where it will thanks lady |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Your mind works in such mysterious ways and I can't wait to see which way it will lean next. Enjoyed this D. Sincerely, Reg |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Such images..almost dreamlike quality and movement. Always interesting and well done, you. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
regina, come examine my mind? won't take long (grin) thanks babe for the eye touch ms martie, thank you ms for your wave hi and comments |
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