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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2002-05-08 07:50 AM


we were the smooth skin beasts there
we wore night on our fur
and journeyed with panting hooves

we made deft water noise
when we ground our desire flesh
against shiver sliver knives

in the glass room with mirrors
where the watchers looked from behind
with hands they covered their eyes

they  touched our sin between peek fingers
and applauded our fervor
with want prints on sweaty palmed walls

they said we were forbidden fruit
but asked for our numbers and names
so they could capture us in their dreams

they begged us to perform as their masters

©Dark
  


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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-05-08 07:55 AM


incredible.

a carny from the outside in...

or that is what most people think.

touche'

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2002-05-08 08:20 AM


serenity..thanks ms...how about ice dancing pairs?  lol

catalinamoon
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3 posted 2002-05-08 08:53 AM


You sure do these poems well. Enjoyed lots.
Sandra

Enchantress
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4 posted 2002-05-08 09:01 AM


...Remarkable!...

~Morning Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-05-08 09:02 AM


Dark Stranger
Enjoyed the symbolic merry go round.

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2002-05-08 09:04 AM


Enchantress, thank you sweet lady

Sandra, slow hugs for your touch, thanks

Sy, thank you kind sir...

Decaflame
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7 posted 2002-05-08 09:17 AM



horses

madhouse

children

these are the thoughts you left behind in the dream of dark...

Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2002-05-08 10:04 AM




(sigh) WOW!!! I too depicted this as some kind of emotional merry-go-round, sweet friend, this is fabulous, I LOVE IT!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) This is a lovely and somewhat haunting verse, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

LRbaba
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9 posted 2002-05-08 10:09 AM


yeah Dark
those are some sultry images
likum

Nightshade
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just out of reach
10 posted 2002-05-08 10:19 AM


Dark - this one makes me either want to purr or growl...haven't quite made up my mind yet. Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2002-05-08 10:35 AM


deca, thank you for the sweet touch ms..
actually just lovers that don't care if anyone is watching..but know they are..


Noah...naughty is all..not bad..thanks my friend

LRbaba, a pleasure to have your review and comments, thanks

Nightshade..both please...naughty and slow ache thoughts..thank you much

SmittenKitten
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12 posted 2002-05-08 12:26 PM



DS~ Mmm...steamy.  My tea was already hot enough this morning!   
I love the title "siftshapes".
How nice it would be to throw off the bow-lines and not care for awhile, like this.

*hugs*
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Dark Stranger
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13 posted 2002-05-08 02:32 PM


smittykitty...
ya just gotta do it..
let it drift where it will

thanks lady

rwood
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14 posted 2002-05-08 03:10 PM


Your mind works in such mysterious ways and I can't wait to see which way it will lean next. Enjoyed this D.

Sincerely,
Reg

Martie
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15 posted 2002-05-08 03:13 PM


DS

Such images..almost dreamlike quality and movement.  Always interesting and well done, you.  

Dark Stranger
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16 posted 2002-05-08 03:17 PM


regina, come examine my mind?  won't take long (grin) thanks babe for the eye touch

ms martie, thank you ms for your wave hi and comments

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