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Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2002-05-07 10:38 PM

Half-Moon
of painted shadows,
silky eyes laughing
beneath soft, desire.
Hot purple tears
born of endless lashes.

You...the untouchable one:
the one who can see art
in black silhouettes,
in the tender hope
of dreams unvoiced.

You...the half-moon
of my slit-eyed heart
declaring yourself
the beloved,

the one who has opened
my naive eyes
offering the seduction,
the temptation to be lost
in the silky nearness
of your fevered skin.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2002-05-07 10:40 PM

This is deeply beautiful and set so well upon the page. Excellent. ThisDiamond

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

2 posted 2002-05-07 11:21 PM

Beautifully crafted in flow and style. Well done!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-05-07 11:22 PM

(smiles) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always flow with such romance and sensual beauty! (kiss on cheek) May the cosmic wonders of laughter always shine in you with loves rapture, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-05-07 11:24 PM

Ivy Rose....beautifully penned.
Loved the presentation as well.
~Hugs~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2002-05-08 12:06 PM

IvyRose~
Captivately appealing~
Thoroughly enjoyed the read~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-05-08 05:01 PM

Mercy! This is good...and the hidden fire
within that smoulders....waiting to escape
and burn brightly...

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

7 posted 2002-05-10 12:36 PM

Lovely. I like this:

You...the untouchable one:
the one who can see art
in black silhouettes,
in the tender hope
of dreams unvoiced.

Great imagry....

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2002-05-10 06:11 AM

Enjoyed...James

Melodie Morningstarr
Junior Member

since 2002-05-09

Posts 16
Toronto, ON, Canada

9 posted 2002-05-10 12:19 PM

Now this is good! I've never read such a sensual, explorative tribute to the moon, you've taken this theme and made it your own!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2002-05-10 07:37 PM

Ivy Rose - a lovely romantic write...

BC

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

11 posted 2002-05-10 07:44 PM

Very lovely....

hugssssss
Lauren~

I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings
Could I have been anyone other than me
True poems rest between the words
Give hope a chance to float, it will

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