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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Immersed in documentaries I live on borrowed memories encased within a time gone by the memories that will not die. Read again old journals sadly how fast happy days went madly Such love and joy can not be gone how could my life have gone so wrong? Photographs standing for a life Nothing but papers cut with knife yet memories will not let go I hang on in the hope to know. Till then I borrow all my love it is the stuff that life's made of. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) This is sooooo sadly beautiful, sweet friend, I know with all my heart you have many photo albums of joy and happy memories ahead of you and you will find all your heart desires with the afterglow of your treasured memories! (kiss on cheek) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Read this several times, and each another speechless moment. Bravely said, and honorably written. ThisDiamond |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Sandra~ Beautiful poetess....you weave a powerful poem with flowing rhyme and strong emotions. *hugs* ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ I knew by the lovely title it would be touching ... it is~ 'encased within a time gone by the memories that will not die.' And the memories live on to serve us a slice of our hearts on another day~  Lovely~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sandra, this is perfectly penned... as is all your work. Be well..be happy. ~Hugs~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a sad one Sandra..hugs..very touching.. ~Victoria |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Till then I borrow all my love it is the stuff that life's made of. And ya know what, Sandra...borrowed love is a lot safer!! LMAO Thanks for your concern, recently...I'm fine. Just this ERFKAD's been giving me grief. She wants to be the race car and I think she should be the shoe. It's always something, ya know? |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Memories are a powerful thing that have a way of keeping a hold on our heart. I like to think the best is yet to come even if it's already gone! *shrug* hugs Sandra~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Makes my heart ache, this one does. Well done sweet poetess. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well done. . . but, does life go sadly?? or, do we just see it that way?? -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Melodie Morningstarr Junior Member
since 2002-05-09
Posts 16Toronto, ON, Canada |
This made my eyes sting, I know of this well, eventually it does gets better though. Well written. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I read this poem and thought "Such a pretty, sad girl." Then I saw the picture and that confirmed it. Take care. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sandra, another sad one, you should not be blue, but treat yourself to happiness and time out. Enjoyed the read. Sincerely Rick Love is stuff that gets us through Our hope, our dreams and song Love it seems to mean so much Our joy and what we long But life is our experience Our tutor of each day And sorrow’s there to test us all When all our clouds turn grey Our past becomes our memories Our future, time of hope For somehow love to find us And through it all to cope |
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Joe Lamando Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 124Massachusetts,USA |
Sandra, A great poem! I love your metaphors and the easy rhyming verse. Nicely done. Joe Lamando |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sandra~ HUGSSS dear heart, I know this all too well....PEACE.... Lauren~ I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
catalinamoon - well done, but still so sad... BC |
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