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One Last Time
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One Last Time |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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I’d hoped to see you One last time I’d hoped to give you My every rhyme You, my sweetest ache My heart’s inspire My silent wish Unquenched desire I’d hoped to touch Hand to face To breathe you in One last embrace You, my dearest friend My most treasured memory The one I’ll love Eternally ~SEA~ *I'm sorry I'm not replying much lately my time is terribly limited lately, I'll be back ASAP  [This message has been edited by SEA (05-09-2002 05:19 PM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe darling girl oh my word this is just too too gorgeous, should writing ever be this perfect? Beautiful writing, absolutely beautiful Do you have to really write this well darling heart? Couldn’t you pause in your soaring to the heavens to let some of us lesser mortals join you? No I suppose you can only write as you can.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I have missed you so so much, I can't wait until you can come back posting like usual! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
susan, this was so beautiful in its sadness... your words always convey so much emotion. you just put your heart on the line...and i so love that about you! wonderful write. take care. love ya, amy "you can't stop |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely thoughts Sea..James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue, this is beautiful AND....I do understand.... More than you know...about limited time, etc.... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
You, my sweetest ache My heart’s inspire My silent wish Unquenched desire I sure get this one, Susan. Hurry back. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
A lovely dedication, SEA! Corinne |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Sue! I know about limited time.... come back whenever you can. ~Big Hugs~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Heartfelt and sweet. And I hear ya about not much time. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
WOW, Susan, some very lucky guy. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
*bump* |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very much, I am trying to sneak on line as much as I can, but as things are, it will be mostly at night.... you are all awesome |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
yeah.... i had hoped for that myself doesn't look like it'll happen tho  nice write seasidegurl!!! |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Ahhhhh.... It's so romantic!!!!! Great work, SEA!! _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - you write beauty with sadness. Well done... BC |
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