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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-05-07 06:01 PM

“SOUTHERN NIGHTS”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
This steamy tropic island,
southern hemisphere…
Breezes warm with you,
skin soft, sincere…

Rum flowing smoothly,
dancing, reggae rhythm…
Flavor of the beat inside,
mood starting to blossom…

Lost unto dream worlds,
floating over the floor…
Holding close, not letting go,
neither had this before…

Amorous the way you are,
wanting your many delights…
Can’t help loving you,
here, in southern nights…
~~~~

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2002-05-07 06:11 PM

Made me feel like i was there...lovely words indeed Bill..

~Victoria

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

2 posted 2002-05-07 06:14 PM

Bill darling boy this is perfect, the flow absolutely excellent. You write so well darling heart and I’m always left in amazement. Utterly utterly wonderful, as are you always. You excel at writing this Romance darling heart you really do
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-05-07 06:30 PM

YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always light these pages with such tropical delight and heavenly romance! (big huggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2002-05-07 06:30 PM

so you are beginning to like the South? or just their nights?
*s
M

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

5 posted 2002-05-07 07:47 PM

Bill...Very steamy poem!!! Sizzling with sensuality and untamed passion.

***Ivy Rose

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2002-05-07 07:54 PM

Wow Bill, very nice mood you brought here.
Sandra

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-05-07 07:54 PM

Bill...very steamy and sensual.
Reminded me of that song...
Southern Nights....love that song...
and this write!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2002-05-07 07:56 PM

Whew!! I can almost here the whirring of the overhead fan ..hot .. hot .. hot. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2002-05-07 08:18 PM

I rememeber the south being humid,
but not nearly as warm as this.
What a romantic and starry night you portray.

Really nice BC~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2002-05-09 04:23 PM

sorry BC, I couldn't help but think of that old Glen Campbell song, "Southern Nights". . . this totally reminded me of it. . .

great work. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

11 posted 2002-05-09 07:42 PM

Rum flowing smoothly,
dancing, reggae rhythm…
Flavor of the beat inside,
mood starting to blossom…

Does make me miss the southern summer nights. Maybe it's time for a vacation. One way to Margaritaville!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2002-05-10 06:05 AM

Enjoyed...James

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

13 posted 2002-05-10 05:09 PM

*SIGH*
lovely Bill, so many memories came to mind....

Lauren~

I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings
Could I have been anyone other than me
True poems rest between the words
Give hope a chance to float, it will

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

14 posted 2002-05-10 05:18 PM

Bill,
if you could write like that about the south of your land maybe it's time you came to my great southern land.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

15 posted 2002-05-10 05:32 PM

I see yr margarita and raise you a corona.

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