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Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

0 posted 2002-04-09 11:59 PM

She said we’d been to first grade together
I took her word for it years later
when we met…again
the television on, muted
Jackson Browne playing, ‘Stay’
and I did
for as long as she wanted me

she was the first girl
who ever wrote me poetry

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2002-04-10 12:00 PM

Duncan,
Sounds like your hooked to me!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2002-04-10 12:00 PM

Awwww Duncan....How special....

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2002-04-10 12:03 PM

Duncan~
Oooohhhh, I like it~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 2002-04-10 12:08 PM

Glad it wasn't Ray Charles playing "Hit the Road, Jack"!

A very delicate touch here, Sir Duncan

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

5 posted 2002-04-10 01:17 AM

Duncan~ A tender thought, caught and splashed onto the page, ready to jump into our hearts. Very touching

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

6 posted 2002-04-10 07:18 AM

Yes, I think we always have fond memories of the first person to write us poetry don’t we? I recall a one room bedsit, and reading what he wrote. Still brings a smile to my face all these years later.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

7 posted 2002-04-10 07:24 AM

I love this one.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

8 posted 2002-04-10 07:28 AM

Jackson Browne playing, "Stay"
and I did
for as long as she wanted me

she was the first girl
who ever wrote me poetry
===============================

and me thinks she wont be the last

ya knew I was gonna love this one didnt ya.
ya cant ever go wrong with JB

very very cool write D.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-04-10 09:02 AM

(smiles) Awwwwww, this is sooooo lovely, sweet friend, you must feel so lucky to have someone write poetry to you like that before! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is touching! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2002-04-10 09:11 AM

yes, this touches some sweet memories for me I think I still have the first poem a guy ever wrote me tucked away in a shoe box....this made me remember his smile, thank you Cowboy for the walk down memory lane

and the song that will be stuck in my head today

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

11 posted 2002-04-10 09:30 AM

My sister worked with a guy who said he was in her 7th grade class with her but she didnt remember..this was about twenty five years later ha..anyway they dated for a while but didnt work out..enjoyed Duncan

very sweet

~Victoria

"If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare)

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2002-04-10 09:35 AM

Duncan,
Enjoyed, good write.

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

13 posted 2002-04-10 11:46 AM

Sweet

too bad I can't dip my toes in the nostalgic pool with that one..because uhh nobody really has written me a poem..well maybe one person did but he doesnt count:P

Kristen

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

14 posted 2002-04-10 12:28 PM

Bravo my friend....

I could use such memories today...

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

15 posted 2002-04-11 12:01 PM

I'm still waiting for one to write for me... this tender memory reassures me the wait is worthwhile. *S* I enjoyed this, Duncan.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

16 posted 2002-04-11 12:36 PM

Ahhh what a lovely memory!
Love this Duncan...
very tender touch to it.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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