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Close call
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
A bad seed sleeping no immediate threat but certain to thrust your fist through dirt again no thought to life that rests above no care to spirit it may disrupt but sleeping I am tired, too enticed to remember what I loved about you you stir I flinch temptation vanishes |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Duncan, Ouch...you make me feel bad.  [This message has been edited by Larry C (04-11-2002 02:23 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
understand the feelings very well... nicely done my friend... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I am tired, too enticed to remember what I loved about you you stir I flinch temptation vanishes ================================ so that was you in my mirror... Duncan...this reads like it feels to sleep alone ... even in the relief of it..there is the ache...dont I know. Once again your gift for words of less sting like so much more. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan, Something to think about, enjoyed the read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I am tired, too enticed to remember what I loved about you you stir I flinch temptation vanishes ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Dang! This is painful to read! Well done Duncan. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this would be sleeping alone next to someone I think? It reads with a sting, right in the heart....*hugs* for you Cowboy  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, very painful stuff here Duncan. Hope things are ok. Sandra |
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