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Spirit Of Twilight
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0 posted 2002-04-10 11:50 AM



Love begets love...

As I fly with you,
revel in gold-dust
and dream in pure blue,
my mind and soul dance in symphony.

As we glide,
breathing in that precious dust.
Teasing the moonbeams to play
and getting the rainbow to be our way,
beauty and truth lights our view.

In your arms I'm Vapor Dew
thank you so much,
I feel my spirits soar
for no one holds me but you!!!

Oh tis romance,
of a fine and rare kind.
Pure in form
spiritual in bond.

Love begets love
and I send you mine.
I'll hold you tight,
for you're my knight.

Thank you Newell for the words you inspire and will continue to do!

© Copyright 2002 Neha Malhotra - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-04-10 07:01 PM




YAY!!! Oh my gosh, how could this ever get off of Page 1 without one reply, back up to the top you go, YAY!!! (kiss on cheek) This is a beautiful declaration of pure, happy love, sweet friend, may your heart always sparkle like a star in love every night and like the sun everyday! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-04-10 07:06 PM


Beautiful words...beautifully written!
Enchantress
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3 posted 2002-04-10 07:25 PM


Wonderful poem...simply lovely!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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4 posted 2002-04-10 07:48 PM


Beautiful, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Spirit Of Twilight
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5 posted 2002-04-11 12:30 PM


Floria,
Thank you for your sweet reply.
Neha

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6 posted 2002-04-11 12:33 PM


Mistletoe Angel,
You are truly one! I know no critiques on the poems I post here can be complete without your beautiful ones. You have a very beautiful heart and that is what makes each of your replies so special!
Thank you!
Neha

Spirit Of Twilight
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7 posted 2002-04-11 12:35 PM


Magnus,
Thank you for kind reply...I am glad you read my poem.
Neha

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8 posted 2002-04-11 12:36 PM


Enchantress,
Thank you for your sweet reply. I am glad you read my poem!
Neha

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