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ambermize
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since 2001-04-21
Posts 157
California

0 posted 2002-05-06 10:56 PM


I was wrong ,
And now I see,
That wanting you,
Must never be.

A child I am,
For needing this,
A woman lost,
Inside your kiss.

Time overlooks me,
As do you,
But deep inside,
I need you to.

My ignorant nature,
Got the best of us both,
I gave to much,
Without any hope.

Tommorow comes,
As if I never knew you,
Should I forget,
What I know I should do.

A night of passion,
While fooling myself,
A doubting inside,
As to what you felt.

I have comprimised myself,
In a eager situation,
To find the love I lost,
Without anticipation.

And I'm sorry.

[This message has been edited by ambermize (05-06-2002 10:57 PM).]

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-05-06 11:20 PM


Love isn't always what it seems or what we follow around in our dreams. But someone once said (probably just in Hollywood) it meant never having to say 'I'm sorry.'
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-05-07 05:45 AM


Enjoyed this...James
Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
3 posted 2002-05-08 03:18 AM


this is really excellent...you laid
your feelings openly out on the line...
a remarkable thing to do and very hard!
just remember something...EVERYTHING takes
two people...take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

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