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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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For You I felt helpless today felt the pain, the anguish and the torment you whispered to me your hopelessness and I was unable to help I tried to reach out for you tried to hold on, but then all too quickly you were gone Today I felt alone, your words still ringing in my ears I cannot offer you anything but compassion and my shoulder your tears will flow sooner or later and when they do I will be here; I will always be here for you I felt helpless today felt the pain, the anguish and the torment But that is nothing compared to what you are going through just know I'm here, know that I love you, know that I will understand I will be here; I will always be here for you for Rose-Lyn, the hard times will become less~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (05-06-2002 09:42 AM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Tracy darling girl, this is utterly divine, as always your writing far surpasses the mere brilliant and is superb. You know I love this, that is a given of course. The lines are truly exquisite and YOU know I utterly utterly love it. Why is it do you suppose that your writing far surpasses the mere ordinary and soars into wonderment? Well, whatever the reason I utterly utterly love it You have so much compassion in your soul, this is wonderful   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
tracie66 A wonderful write, enjoyed. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
most times compassion and a shoulder is all one needs..nicely done *s M |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are a true angel and my heart too joins you in your prayers and I hope soon joy will come to your friends heart and kiss the tears away! (kiss on cheek) This is beautifully compassionate, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tracie, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you!  Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Tracie...this is beautiful. I could feel the pain in each line. Wonderful writing. alan |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
tracie66 - it is always good to know that someone is there for you...and that you can be there for them as well. Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a promise from the heart. . . wonderful my friend. . . so good to read your words again. . .  ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
tracie66 - beautiful warm poem. This one touched me, for I also know the pain and hurt. Thank you for writing this one... BC |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
tracie~ this is so lovely, a golden promise from your heart...what more could one ask for? perfectly penned, and it made me smile...though i know it was written out of sadness. please take care. amy "you can't stop |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I cannot offer you anything but compassion and my shoulder your tears will flow sooner or later and when they do I will be here; I will always be here for you ========================= you offer so much more...Trac, this is a wonderful gifting of heart and comfort... the true beauty of the words is their sincerety. Your friend is very lucky. lovely write poetess girlie. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is wonderful, and a true gift of friendship...just keep reminding them that you are here, when they are ready, and they will come soon, and leave, the better for having you in their life... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear little MM~ You have made my day with your beautiful, sweet comments, thanks for reading and replying with such a warm and loving reply ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Dear Seymour~ I'm so glad you liked this, thanks heaps for your comments ~HUGS~ nakdthoughts~ Your words I appreciate...thanks ~HUGS~ Oh sweet Noah~ You always have such beautiful and caring words for me and I really do thank you for them and appreciate what you have to say always I do hope that my s-in-l will be O'K, I will keep praying....thanks once again Noah Alan~ Thanks so much for your lovely reply, it is appreciated ~HUGS~ Nightshade~ Yes it is indeed, I just feel so helpless as I'm so far away but I know that she knows that I love her and care for her very much and that whenever she wants to talk we can. ~HUG~ Dear Bill~ I'm glad to have touched you and I hope the pain you have felt is no longer ~HUGS~ Dearest Aimster~ Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your beautiful, sincere comments ~HUGS~ Dear Janny~ Thanks hon for your most warm and caring response, it was so nice. My s-in-l will hopefully be O'K soon. Hi Sunshiny girl Your comments touched me and I thank you for your warmth, appreciate it very much Love is the life of the soul... |
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