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Open Poetry #20

Whenn I Kiss You

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

0 posted 2002-05-06 09:24 PM

When I Kiss You

When I kiss you
In the daylight or by firelight
You will feel the passion!
Burning deep inside

When I kiss you
In the twilight
you will see sparks
Shining in my eyes

When I kiss you
Beside the oceans of blue
You will feel a love
Hidden from view

When I kiss you
Like no one before
You will come back
To get even more

When kissed you
you will feel the desire
Engulfing my body
Like a raging wildfire

Icyheart
05/06/02

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-05-06 09:29 PM

(smiles) This is sooooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love always light these pages and sigh with beauty! (big hugggssssss) May you always find that spark in your loves eyes every day and night, sweet friend, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Ladyhawke
Member

since 2001-09-01

Posts 86

2 posted 2002-05-06 10:20 PM

Sounds like one hell of a kiss!

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

3 posted 2002-05-06 10:27 PM

HOT!, steamy, passionate, oh what imagery is created, one lucky person to have received a kiss like this.

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

4 posted 2002-05-06 10:45 PM

Alan...Passionate poem with an equally passionate kiss!!!! ***Ivy Rose

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