Open Poetry #20 |
Scream at the sky |
Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I want to scream at the sky but it meant me no harm holding my heart night after night as I looking north talked to you in my head that’s going to be a real hard habit to break |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Ducan, You said this just right. I really hope everything is ok with you Hugs, Tara Hmmmmmm..... I was going to send you an email to ask if you are ok... but it's not listed. So I will do this... email me if you ever need to. rosepetals25pip@hotmail.com. "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (05-06-2002 01:16 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sigh. It always is. But you do know, there is something about looking NORTH, that is more than instinct...it's DNA...it's "ancestral memory" don't be so hard on yourself lovie. and now? go read another poem about NORTH? christoper's BREAK NORTH... these could be companion pieces... gentle hug. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I want to scream at the sky but it meant me no harm holding my heart night after night ========================== .... damn I love the way your write D .... thats all a moth can say right now. me |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
As tears fall down from heaven To the sound of broken hearts Know that still I love you Though knowing we must part And somewhere in the lifetime That we thought forever ours Our love shone as a moon beam As we wished on brightest stars There’s not just one heart broken For another cries as well Know that still a heart beats Locked inside its jailers cell If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Duncan, I can feel such angst in your words, sweet friend, I hope everything is alright, for we are always here if you need someone to talk to! (sigh) This is sad but powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Duncan~ 'that’s going to be a real hard habit to break' It may not make much sense right now, (it never does when you're hurting) but habits, like promises ... can (and will) be broken~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
at this, and at Tracey's reply. I bite my tongue, promising not to ask the Why? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Like Kacy, I too want to ask why? But, that isn't for us to know...and, if it makes you feel better to yell at the sky Duncan....then go ahead, maybe I will hear you... I'm north also. *Also sad to read Tracey's reply* ~gentle hugs tonight~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Duncan darling boy this is an amazing piece from you the pain which aches in this is so clearly expressed. I’m awed by the way you’ve shown so much in so little wonderful writing utterly wonderful Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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