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Soft Melody
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Soft Melody |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Soft Melody My heart dances with The rhythm of our sweet love A never-ending Melody that our souls sway Note by note in perfect time. "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (05-05-2002 10:48 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Tara~I do hope your melody plays on eternally. ~Hugs~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! Oh Tara, I have missed you so so so much, I hope everything is alright; I am delighted to see love poems flowing from your heart as always! (kiss on cheek) May you and Dave forever find happiness together, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Just lovely! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
May it be a song without end, Tara...  |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Enchantress - Thank you I'm glad you liked it.Noah - You are so sweet *hugs* Thanks. August - Thank you  Balladeer - I hope so too. Thank you.And now I'm going to give a shameless plug  Dave and I wrote a poem together called The Snowqueen. It is long, and will be posted in chapters. It is REALLY good. At least, lol, I like it. Then again I was a co-writer so I am biased LOL. Please check it out! The first chapter was posted yesterday, and the next chapter will be posted tonight. "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Stunning~ Tara~ HUGSSSS Lauren~ |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
and she's all mine.... ok, you can all be jealous now  heh. -Dave |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What a pretty tanka! Awww, you two are just so darn cute Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound...or a smiling mouth" ~Kahlil Gibran~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (05-06-2002 12:55 AM).] |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Tara....this is a wonderful tanka. It flows like a gentle brook. alan |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
rosepetals25 - a soft melody that flows with rhythm. Great write... BC |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
tara, a lovely tanka indeed...this left me with a huge smile and the need to go call my girlfriend thanks forsharing. take care. amy "you can't stop |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Your poem and your spirit seem to sing This is so lovely Take care Liz |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
*sigh* |
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