Open Poetry #20 |
A Rainy Morning |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
A Rainy Morning the sun and the wind have greeted the day now that the thirst-quenching rain’s gone away the land is bright with its sweet relief soil’s sucked up what the sky’s released I think somewhere there are birds at play rejoicing in some pool’s array ‘nd worms are creepin’ atop the lawn while fishies ford the stream to spawn trees all wavin’ the clouds, “Good-bye,” an’ ol’ Tom’s cattin’ his springtime spy. ©May 5, 2002 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love spring so so so much, just the vision of happy birds jocundly splashing and playing in the birdbath always delights my day! (kiss on cheek) This is absolutely breathtaking, sweet friend, springs essence fills your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Virginia, a lovely spring write... after the rain....enjoyed much. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
VAS... I love this little work of art.. alan |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Nice images. Thanks for the calm within in the storm. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
VAS - nice write for a gone rainy morning. Things always seem to come to life after one... BC |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
trees all wavin’ the clouds, “Good-bye,” ------- love these lines! \\ |
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