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Elias
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Elias calls out to the night, Carry me to heavens bright, Upon the winds of evermore, To sail the clouds of heaven's floor. A hunter's moon glows opaltine, As left behind is vespertine, Newborn stars illume the skies, Sings Terpsichore in night's reprise. Unfettered wings of angel's grace, As comets through the heavens race, Hush Elias, for day is done, Elias with the night is one. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Tim darling boy OH MY! Such an outstanding and wonderful piece of writing, I’ve read fabulous pieces from you before this is simply stunning. Truly you’ve outdone yourself. What can I say except this is utterly wonderful. It really is amazingly beautiful piece of writing, excellent   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Tim, this is sooooooo beautiful, I just love studying the stars and satellites and you have spoken of this moon so wonderfully! (sigh) May you awlays find Elias and an infinite number of wonders in the skies above every night, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A lullabye...a beautiful peace... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Just once? I wish you would come back and explain the allusions here... and no, I'm not confused, but the beauty of this one thrilled me so much, that I would hate to miss the subtlety of your intent. My gosh, Tim. smiling. |
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