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Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

0 posted 2002-05-05 10:03 AM

Lay Your Troubles Down

Lay your troubles down come to me
I’ll soothe away all your cares or worry
Slip off your jacket undo your tie
Let go of tension feel your spirit fly
I massage your shoulders just like this
Maybe I’ll get a taste of bliss
Don’t talk darling lean against me
Let your soul run wild and free

Lay your soul beside mine come to me
I’ll take away your stress naturally
Slip into evening I’ll ease your mind
Imagine the delights we could find
Breathe in deeply you’ll need air
Let me show you just how much I care
Don’t speak darling I’ll spin you dreams
Let me lead you into pleasures schemes

Lay your heart at my feet come to me
I’ll ease your frustrations so gently
Slip off your cares lean back do
I’ll make you feel good all the way through
Let me release the pressures of the day
I’ll make it vanish completely away
Don’t speak darling don’t utter a sound
Let me lift you right off the ground

Marsha

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-05-05 10:08 AM

Could one ask for any more?

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-05-05 10:19 AM

Marsha,
You lifted me right off the ground.
Utterly excellent writing.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-05-05 10:40 AM

YES Mushy, I think you just did.....

What a relaxing and soothing piece of poetry.

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

4 posted 2002-05-05 02:46 PM

marsha,

sweet sis...this is so beautiful. you
had me floating while reading this.
your words are so lifting and gentle.
this is just so lovely! i love you sis.
take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-05-05 05:12 PM

(smiles) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, and may your love forever wash away your tears and hug you close when you feel sad or frustrated! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiuflly compassionate, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

6 posted 2002-05-05 05:48 PM

I'll book on the next plane, mmmm I wonder though if it was meant for the likes of me LOL

Beautiful write sweet Mushy

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

7 posted 2002-05-05 09:07 PM

Marsha...Very well-penned!!! Perfect depiction of a moment of rest and romance.

***Ivy Rose

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

8 posted 2002-05-05 09:11 PM

Mushy~ Ooo, lucky man!

This is such a soothing read...I'm sure you could soothe away anyone's stress and pain...you just have that compassionate, kind way about you that tells me everyone finds comfort in your company

*hugs*
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

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