Open Poetry #20 |
In Search Of |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The warmth of heart then made of ice a feeling once ‘gain breaking twice A tear of fall that tumbled down as lips did curl and bring to frown Love felt upon the vast of plain of tumbleweeds and missing rain Desert winds drying saddened tears Cast out the heart a thousand fears Beyond the sea and mountains high toward a place where bridges lie A heart in walk and wait of love a vision born from yon above. Eyes of gleam that cast a spell do shine of that they know so well A vision of a dream of night beheld by stars, the cosmos bright Till fires of hearts do warm in glow and whispers tell of what they know Love shall journey across the land in search of maiden’s soft warm hand [This message has been edited by Magnus (05-05-2002 01:55 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Magnus! Thank you! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes it shall...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Till fires of hearts do warm in glow and whispers tell of what they know Love shall journey across the land in search of maiden’s soft warm hand ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hark! Barry! Doth thou not hear this fair maiden sighing??? Beautiful write as always! ~Searching Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) And may you find all your heart desires happily on your journey, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
As always.....a wonderful read. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Magnus...Very well-expressed. Love in search of a fair maiden's hand...classicly romantic. ***Ivy Rose |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Love felt upon the vast of plain of tumbleweeds and missing rain-- I was just explaining to JM...(Janet Marie) that once in awhile I read something that makes me say "HELL YES" out loud. (guess who just startled the family again?) Absolutely loved this...and the two above lines are a poem all by themselves. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kari.... You are very welcome...I think?? Happy that you enjoyed this... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
JM, thank you very much as always.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nancy... Yay Maid of hair so read I do hear thy sigh from far Lie thee down upon thy bed and let thy dreams be afar. Thank You Nancy... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah, as always, thank you for you ever flowing regards... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Chris, pleased that you enjoyed this... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ivy Rose, thanks...you have always been so gracious to me with my poetry... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Serenity....You are a trip! HELL YES!! I love that...very pleased you got a charge from this poem... |
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