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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2002-05-05 04:38 PM



That And More

Riding along, the wind in my hair
almost wishing to run out of gas.
Its been one of those days
made of lonely nights, with
moist of thoughts needing
a soft hand touch, a caress to still,
a meaning to the whys.

Riding along, the fresh colors of the rainbow
peeking out and about and from behind
reveling in their beauty, their right to blossom
in the warmth of the sun, and my eyes
taking it in, needing the beauty
from without to calm my within.

Riding along, nearing the familiar,
remembering morning words
reminding me I am rambling.
Maybe I was, so what,
maybe I wanted a little time,
a little feel of worth, a light pat on the back
reminding me of who I am, what I am
and that I shall always be
that and more...


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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1 posted 2002-05-05 04:57 PM




(smiles) Oh Maureen, this is fabulous, sweet friend, yes, you will always be you and you are a very special person to us all and I know as long as you hold these muses of the morning to your heart, you will find true peace to your heart! We all love you so much, sweet friend, BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2002-05-10 09:12 AM


well this one only touched you Noah and  I could have  known it was your words placed here to make me feel they were worth writing..thank you always Noah..someday in real you will make someone very happy with your kind and sweet personality.

many hugss
M

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3 posted 2002-05-15 03:36 AM


YOU GO, GIRL! I love this, and I agree that you are all that and then some...more Be happy
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4 posted 2002-05-15 03:43 AM


Maureen
This is a beautiful ramble and a very gratifying read. But I have been reading your poetry for a long time now and this is quite usual for you to write with such open beauty!
Have a nice day!

Eric

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2002-05-16 06:05 AM


ps  thank you, you are such a dear to read and respond to my words...

hugs
M

E..it's been awhile but I am always happy to see you return

hugs
M..and thanks for the  compliment. *s

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6 posted 2002-05-17 11:20 AM


Feel free to ramble in my mind any ole time, Maureen.  
I guess you know I loved this piece

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