Open Poetry #20 |
Blue Sea Serenade |
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
The song of the whale serenades the blue seas gentle whispers of love and eternity Alone in the shadows of soft moonlight the song of the whale haunting seas of night Singing in harmony to operatic tides dancing their tail dance upon waves they ride A ballet of whispers deeply in the sea in darkness they cry please save the whales before they die Endangered whales sing final lullabies
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Victoria, this is sooooo heartbreaking, I love whales and dolphins so much and it saddens and upsets me how sailors and others treat them so cruelly as we do to so many other innocent animals! (sad sigh) My prayers are with the whales and their environmental protection and preservation, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Victoria. ~Hugs~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This nearly made me cry, Vic. I hate the thoughts of endangered animals anywhere. Beautifully done. S |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Yes, save the whales and stop trading with nations that still slaughter them. Wonderfully done, my friend. *hugs* Michael |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
A ballet of whispers deeply in the sea in darkness they cry please save the whales" I am in AWE of this sweet lady....what a treasure...I will keep this... Lauren~ I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Victoria...Very nicely done. Beautifully expressed emotions and very potent message in this poem. ***Ivy Rose |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
awwww Vic....its a contrast, their size, their power, yet they dominate not the seas altho they could. Instead, they spread Whale Song, and the lesson that Big is not always the thing to be, and it can be tempered with grace, much like ALL of your words. Pleased as punch you wrote this: the words were overdue for their praise. ~hhhhugs~ jeff |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Victoria, It has to be said again and again. please save the whales before they die Endangered whales sing final lullabies Thank you dear. Sy |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you noah..yes alot countries still slaughter the whale..such beautiful mammals they are..hugs thank you nancy..and for peeking in hugs sandra..thank you..yes it is a sad thing just like the elephants slaughtered for ivory michael..thank you yes that is a good idea..hugs lauren..thank you .im glad you enjoyed ivy rose..thank you so much for reading..nice to hear from you.. jeff...well i guess what inspired this was a whale song cd i bought and i loved listening to the songs of the whale..soooo beautiful sy...thank you sy..it would be terrible to lose those beautiful creatures..hugs |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A nice message...don't say save the sharks...too many incidents lately... The Japanese have a liking for whale meat...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you..no i wont james..and yes i know Japan is one of the countries that still slaughter them..such a shame... ~Victoria |
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