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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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This poem died a sad, subtle death in a different forum. Let's see if it fares any better here... -By far- The sun, she swelled up to my size before she fell to pieces. The glass tipped over off the table, spilling petal drops. Time took hold of moment's hand, two bird wings in the mirror. The silver was not light enough to hold the moon, rain stars. (A song to wish the verse she wrote was enough by far) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Time took hold of moment's hand, two bird wings in the mirror. The silver was not light enough to hold the moon, rain stars. ============================== I wasnt at that other forum...thats the only thing wrong with the poem  *L*How can one not love this line...... "Time took hold of moment's hand," very very cool...very very deep if one really thinks about it..... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I can always count on you, Butterfly Slippers.  Danke. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
tis I who thanks you  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggsssssss) Oh Michael, I am so sorry this crashed at that other forum and I apologize if I don't always read you, I know how you feel for I have crashed at so many other forums and I truly do enjoy reading your fabulous descriptive style so very much! (sigh) This is filled with sincerity and powerful perspectives, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Butterflies seem attracted to this poem! Fine by me. Thank you both. *bows* |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
beautiful poem and i agree with JM very deep...lovely writing from your pen...so sorry it crashed at the other forum, perhaps the right people weren't reading it take care.amy "you can't stop |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I agree with the others. Your words are soul felt. Deb |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thank you. |
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