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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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I could live within your words for a while before you tossed me out, old coffee. I could live within your eyes, a drop before you cleansed yourself of tears. I could live within your arms for a fraction, if we could keep our backs to the ticking. I could live within your life for a while if you gave me a day, or weeks, or years. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Nice b...very nice...melodious, slow - like a clock ticking. Enjoyed the read..  K |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very calming, relaxing...and oh so romantic! Enjoyed.... ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Exactly. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You really hit home with the "old coffee" line...love your new style Mike... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 Thanks. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
but a day is all we can truly ask for |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I really like this one..someone once said that to me..."would you like to stay with me for a week a month or a year?..i thought it was so great ..enjoyed.. ~Victoria |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
*s M |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks, all. |
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