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Sleighing Thoughts
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Sleighing Thoughts |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Tonight I hope to sleep in comfort, memories aside, this bed of sleighing thoughts and mattress dreams so long ago, abandoned stead. My room is me, of burgundy papered expressed, no words reveal the want of then to feel it now how long ago, my dreams would steal Would take me on a gift of trip caress the softness of my skin would carry me to far off lands to hold me through the dark within Until the mornings peek through crack would wake me, eyes in want of day. Tonight I will be bedded old in new of me, now here to stay. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling girl this is seriously excellent writing, the flow of this is perfect, the internal pace and the construction cannot be bettered. as always you delight when you write, and when you write in this style you excel. Beautifully portrayed view dreaming scenes. I love this one darling girl absolutely love it   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
have comfort in sleep and be surrounded by peace uninterrupted |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Maureen, sometimes it is good to sleep alone, sometimes NOT..I know you know what I mean. I ike this write. Sandra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thanks all..Sandra..I haven't slept in my own bed in over a year..couldn't do it in that room...until tonight and I am about to have the best nights sleep ever, finally *s hugs M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (05-03-2002 12:27 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Maureen, I do hope you sleep well tonight. I enjoyed the flow of this piece...lovely. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Nancy, I hope I do too..I haven't slept more than 3 hrs at a time in so long...but I think I will finally rest easy tonight...it has been a long time coming *s M |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
M, Such forward thinking will get you through the day as well. What an awesome poem. I'm so impressed.  It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I think the dark within is the key of this piece. Makes me sleepy in good ways. And alert in others. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Larry, are you easily impressed? *s thanks M |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) This is a wonderfully touching poem,s weet friend, we all wish you the sweetest dreams tonight, have a wonderful rest! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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