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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I Sat perfectly still So as to let the dance Of morning rays glide without stumble across the back of my eyes where I held those shadows of us locked in embrace erasing as they touched any tinge of gloom settled in the dust of time New day burn of brilliance Blinds those visions leaving Cycloptic spots of color Now blue Now green To float where once We were Waiting for driven stake To complete the process But if I sit perfectly still What lies behind all the times and all the words Spoken or not Will whisper with tender bladed rustle Letting me hear What I no longer See |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I Sat perfectly still So as to let the dance Of morning rays glide without stumble across the back of my eyes where I held those shadows of us locked in embrace erasing as they touched any tinge of gloom settled in the dust of time =============================== you had me from the first verse if not the title  glad you stopped in poet sir...I have missed your words and wisdom. ... and I don't know why ... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Where have you been, rascal? Welcome back my friend. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Nice evocation of losing sight. Really enjoyed, especially the "bladed rustle." [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (05-03-2002 03:55 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron I've missed your poetry. When one sense is not functioning right, there are others that become so acute. A lovely metaphor! Enjoyed! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: these are holding me... so good to have you home again... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Loving every word of this piece Ron. You have been missed.... ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Thanks all... been out of town for a week and trying now to catchup with projects here in the office. I have tried to read a few poems since I got back..and must say the ones I have read are indeed wonderful... perhaps next week I can spend some time reading and commenting...I hope so... Thanks again for the comments, they are appreciated greatly |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Great write C. Reaches deep and down into recollection and realization. You share so well your thoughts. Hugs! Sincerely, Reg |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Cycloptic spots of color-- unusual imagery here, but my how it works! Good to read you again...methinks I am addicted!  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Oh Ron, we all have missed you so so much, I am so glad you are coming back soon, I hope everything is going well with work! (big hugggsssss) I think I can understand what you are saying here, sometimes we may lose sight in what we are doing or where we are going yet we can always hear and have our words! (sigh) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always nshine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-03-2002 08:46 PM).] |
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