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bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2002-05-02 02:12 PM

Let me have your rain.
I'm thirsty to be filled with day.
Let me have your sun
so heather-cold among these trees.
Let me have your snow.
Blind the sky you want me to watch.
Let me have your sea.
Drown blue in the salt of me.

Let me have your road.
Travel up and back and forth.
Let me have your words.
Sing them through dawn dusking lips.
Let me have your blood.
Time just wants to stain this pen.
Let me have tonight.
We the tremble, cracking glass.

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (05-02-2002 03:04 PM).]

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2002-05-02 02:17 PM

You get a smile..and some of my sun, but you have that anyway. Great write!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 2002-05-02 02:27 PM

Ohhhh....nice, need I say more ?

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2002-05-02 02:38 PM

double thumbs up amigo

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2002-05-02 02:45 PM

Well done - enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2002-05-02 02:48 PM

HA, I'll let you have the rain and the snow. But I'll keep my blood, thank you.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2002-05-02 03:06 PM

I love this....but you know I think your poetry rocks

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

7 posted 2002-05-02 03:06 PM

Aw, c'mon Midnitesun. It only hurts a little.

Glad you all enjoyed. And the feeling's mutual, SEA.

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (05-02-2002 03:08 PM).]

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2002-05-02 03:07 PM

Let me have your rain.
I'm thirsty to be filled with day...

I loved these lines...

I came in to cool off and drink..and I got a double bonus of words to thirst upon..

*s

M

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2002-05-02 03:29 PM

bsquirrel
Well done as the comments show, enjoyed.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

10 posted 2002-05-02 05:24 PM

Thanks!

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

11 posted 2002-05-03 01:12 PM

Only cracking

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2002-05-03 01:17 PM

Way cool write Michael.
Enjoyed so much.
~Hugs~

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

13 posted 2002-05-03 02:05 PM

Thanks lots. Always.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

14 posted 2002-05-03 02:06 PM

(smiles) This is such a wonderful heartfelt write, sweet friend, may you find all your heart desires! (big hugggsssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

15 posted 2002-05-03 02:11 PM

enjoyed

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

16 posted 2002-05-03 07:38 PM

Thank you one and all for reading and enjoyin'.

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