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Trace My Sky
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Trace My Sky |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Trace My Sky Trace my sky with pencil then with thumb rub Into blend of dusk just slipping into love Then on your way across the flight of day Make trees across the mountain into sway Move my place until I’m liquid rendered Winged then rhymed to molded poem tender With whispers tunnel of warm give truth the wrapping put away without a lock this book less strapping To leave the place where cages held the flight Only takes the opening door and light If the line of some sweet muse be lent Across a map of words my heart is bent |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may the maps of your heart forever be blushed with the footprints of true love and serenity! (kiss on cheek) This is delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Marite, How wonderful. Put a book mark on that page... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Martie, love this and the style and flow of it. A little different from most of yours, but very very nicely done... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Thanks, you three...this is different for me..since I prefer to write free verse..but when you're writing a love letter to a muse..you write the way you're inspired. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh....Martie.... Ok dear, on my list when I grow up... write like Martie... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ 'To leave the place where cages held the flight Only takes the opening door and light' You 'know' what this means to me today~  Beautifully written ... even with a different purpose in mind~ LOVE YOU~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Move my place until I'm liquid rendered Winged then rhymed to molded poem tender With whispers tunnel of warm give truth the wrapping put away without a lock this book less strapping ========================= If the line of some sweet muse be lent Across a map of words my heart is bent ========================== you had me from the title on.... the rhyme made it like you were singing it to me...and? IWIHWT...thats some muse dear one...some muse indeed.  ... and I don't know why ... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Move my place until I’m liquid rendered Winged then rhymed to molded poem tender ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Martie....just beautiful! Slightly different style for you but loved it much. ~Hugs~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Martie, your words leave a trace of beauty across the page.....wonderful |
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painted lady Junior Member
since 2001-04-01
Posts 48on the wing or nectaring |
From canvas to whispers to flight . . . ooooooooh, nice. Fav. line: "With whispers tunnel of warm give truth the wrapping" And then my heart with pleasure fills, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
True to form and a sheer delight to read! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie it is such a lovely view from here down between the pages of your thoughts |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Oh yes. |
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