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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Wings Of Wonder ~*Marge Tindal*~ o....o || O ~|~ Flighty~~~|~~~WinginG Lace of delicacy~~~~~|~~~~~on bloom alightS Spreading softest~~.|.~~winged flutterinG In wonder~~~~~~~~.|.~~~~~~~~of flighT Mesmerizing~~~.|.~~~enchantmenT Beauty~~.|.~~beginS A buffeted lace~~.|.~~rising on windS Etching nature~~.|.~~across meadowS On prism~~~~~.|.~~~~~of adorN ButterflY~|~FlutterbY Catch gale~|~early morN Path.|.saiL Winged~Wonder |~| *Inspired by a weekend trip to the Butterfly Conservatory at Cypress Gardens, Florida ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (04-09-2002 06:18 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Looks to me Marge....that you have had a very fun time there...Like this one.. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
OMG I knew I saw you there...LOL I love Cypress Gardens and the wings of wonder, that's the first place I go....LOL Soooo coooool a write.....  Lauren~ Step through the |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
just lovely Marge...I am waiting to see my first of the spring and summer hugs Alice at the moment... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
How do you do these shapes? I am impressed. And the words are lovely, like the buterflies. I love them too. Sandra |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very artistic, Marge. I love it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ Thank you ... it was such a delightful trip~ GreenEyes~ I can't believe we missed one another by a lousy calendar week ! We'll have to syncronize next time ~  *hugs* AliceThruGlass~ I guess we're a little spoiled here in Florida ... they grace the lawns year-round~ Thank you for the read and reply~ CatalinaMoon~ Usually the poem takes it's own shape .. this one was a challenge to me to see if I could do it in the butterfly shape ... It was easy to write ... but a wench to format so that the PREVIEW screen would let me see the whole thing ! I finally shoved a quarter in it and force-fed it through~ They are fun and can be addicting ... but I love them~ Glad you like it too~ SmartChick~ Thank you sweetie ... glad you enjoyed it~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
 This is very beautiful, Marge...and I love the way you did that butterfly shape. ~butterfly hugs~ copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
oh now you know i had to reply to this one...its got my name in it!!  very neat miss margie..my mom has a butterfly fettish..i think i'll send her a link to this beautiful little ditty...  hugs, g |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lyra~ And I thank you for the lovely flutterby~ DG~ I am so giggling at you~ LOL ... my mother once told me that I was 'almost' a Gale ... and that if she'd known she was going to have three girls (in addition to the boys) she'd have named us - Gale, Windy and Stormy~ Now does THAT crack you up ? *HUGS* to you gal~ (errr, Gale) ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: this really captures the wonder of a butterfly! It must have been wonderful to visit them last week-end. we only have a very few yet. Just too cold at night I suppose. But, I'm looking forward to an abundance of them next month. Betty Lou Hebert |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
~Coooooool!~ Now you've got me itching to write a shape poem You find inspiration wherever you go...I hope someday I have that too! Hugs, ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too [This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (04-09-2002 11:56 PM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Have I ever mentioned that you are VERY creative? Lovely piece from the land of Tindal Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ Thanks so much ... when my friend, June, wrote that she was waiting to see what 'inspiring words' I got from the trip .. I just HAD to attempt to capture the butterfly~ SmittenKitten~ Oh goodie !!! I love to see the flutter of creative wings~ LOL ... I sometimes seem to be waiting at the corner of Inspire Lane and Playful Ink Boulevard~ InterLoper~ Morning *HUGS* to you sweetie~ ~Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your poem reminds me so much of a day last summer... when a mimosa tree at my Dad's was shimmering with monarchs... living testament to the fact that bright pink and bronze DO go together. *G* This is beautiful, Marge. *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuthernGal~ To shake a memory from the heart-tree is a treasure to this poetess and friend~ Yep ...... always been kind of fond of that color blend myself~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like the way your mind works! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Ahhhhhh, sometimes that's a toss-up~ Love ya' *Hugs* ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Ohhhh Marge, how you do fly. This is so, so...you know I'm running out of adjectives. Just once could you write something lousy....hehe. Hugs, Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Marge! I never knew there was a butterfly conservatory but I'm glad there is. Obviously it's a wonderful place to inspire such an artistic poetic presentation from you! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marti~ LOL  LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLOh, I can PROMISE you ... I've got that covered !!! But, posting them ... well, that's another ball of wax~ ETHome~ Ohhhhh ... the conservatory is magnificent ! And the 'inspire' flits about in wonderous amazement~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Marge, Yup, lousy indeed. Whatever... Now about that bikini waxing! |
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