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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

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West Coast

0 posted 2002-05-02 06:02 AM

you were flowers growing in sky meadows
there were no clouds or wind
I was there with my eyes
and didn't leave prints with touch feet

I made you poems from twigs and string
you tied them in your hair
and whispered little girl sounds
with your laughing eye mouth

you sang to me when we ate berries
and carved our initials there
on my back skin
with your wet finger knife

we made heart shapes with our breath
and linked them into each other
we said kisses would them metal
and they could never float away

and we kissed until they were heavy iron love

©dark

serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-05-02 06:05 AM

you tied them in your hair
and whispered little girl sounds
with your laughing eye mouth

and just by this verse alone, I can tell...you know the arts of love.

smiling

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2002-05-02 06:11 AM

ms serene...thank you ms....would always do my best over and over until it was perfect..

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-05-02 08:34 AM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love both the innocent and passionate feel of this poem, sweet friend, this is a wonderful meadow serenade! (big hugggssssss) May true love always fill your heart with a faith that be cast with iron, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-05-02 08:53 AM

Dang! This is incredible.
...and good morning to you too Dark.
~sighs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-05-02 09:13 AM

Dark Stranger
Your moans have over tones, enjoyed

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2002-05-02 09:18 AM

Noah, thank you my friend

Nancy, slow hugs for your sweet words

Sy, bless you amigo, I appreciate you

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2002-05-02 09:19 AM

"we made heart shapes with our breath
and linked them into each other"

I think that is so completely COOL!
wow, love the image that brings....

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2002-05-02 09:56 AM

and carved our initials there
on my back skin
with your wet finger knife

Dark Stranger...well now, I think I might be without words at the moment...maybe not....WOW!!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Martie

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California

9 posted 2002-05-02 09:59 AM

DS

"we made heart shapes with our breath
and linked them into each other
we said kisses would them metal
and they could never float away

and we kissed until they were heavy iron love"

Such a wonderful thought!

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2002-05-02 09:59 AM

SEA...thanks babe..have missed you

Nightshade, wink, just picking the right words perhaps? Thank you so much ms

Ms Martie, thanks lil friend for your lady eyes

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (05-02-2002 10:30 AM).]

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

11 posted 2002-05-02 10:19 AM

some lovely blends of images here D...

M

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

12 posted 2002-05-02 11:12 AM

This touches to a depth
only mermen know

this, sir, is a spectacular write,
and a Keeper of the first sort...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

13 posted 2002-05-02 11:20 AM

NT, thanks maureen, pleased that you enjoyed it.

Sunshine, Good Morning, and yes there is a story about me breathing underwater in another life...thanks lady..

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

14 posted 2002-05-02 11:31 AM

When you are ready
you will relate it
poetic or prose
will do fine

bsquirrel

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since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

15 posted 2002-05-02 01:51 PM

Enjoyed.

Indigo
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since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

16 posted 2002-05-02 03:31 PM

pressed for time
they steamed love's fabric smooth
till one of them,
smiling wickedly,
wrinkled it up again

Indigo

Dark Stranger
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Posts 13631
West Coast

17 posted 2002-05-02 04:23 PM

BSQ, thanks my friend

Indigo, they say if it stays wet
it won't wrinkle
supposed to apply to
most any fabric

thanks babe

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

18 posted 2002-05-02 10:24 PM

Sinfully sensuous.
Sandra

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

19 posted 2002-05-02 10:30 PM

"I made you poems from twigs and string
you tied them in your hair
and whispered little girl sounds
with your laughing eye mouth"

pebbles tumble a giggle
as we tickle them with our toes
the sunlight dances in our eyes
as we touch nose to nose

I love the scenery you evoke and how you integrate it into your characters...you are one cool guy DS

*hugs*
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

20 posted 2002-05-02 10:34 PM

You are an artist Ds,
mind if I smile.....

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

21 posted 2002-05-02 10:48 PM

DarkStranger~
Word-silk, woven into it's finest bartering fabric~
Sheer pleasure~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

22 posted 2002-05-03 01:55 AM

Love is the berries, when it's done right!
I liked the soft and hard combination in this! Nice touch DS~

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

23 posted 2002-05-03 06:03 AM

Sandra, thank you so much ms catmoon

SmittyKitty, slow hugs for your sweet touch

Donna, bless your eyes lady friend

Marge, thank you lovely poetess

Bluez, so berry nice of you to visit and sweeten up things thank you

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

24 posted 2002-05-03 02:42 PM

Dark, honey...i believe you are heavy iron love... And you just get better.

Sincerely,
Reg

Chelsea~
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since 2001-02-09

Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA

25 posted 2002-05-04 08:59 PM

Dark Stranger,

This beauty flows
like silk.
I'm amazed with your
unique expression,
you are one talented
poet!

Elan
Member

since 2002-05-03

Posts 382
State of Wide Eye

26 posted 2002-05-04 09:11 PM

quote:
you were flowers growing in sky meadows

I made you poems from twigs and string

you sang to me when we ate berries

we made heart shapes with our breath

and we kissed until they were heavy iron love

Thank you...

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

27 posted 2007-10-31 10:07 AM

The only sinful situation is that we can't all buy a book containing such diamonds as this one.

You really should reconsider, it's a loss for the world if it does not get to enjoy your poetry and ... you!

I do hope you have this material in some safe place! ... we, the girls, could ask for the services of ... Arsène Lupin, if you would not listen!

Amazing poetic talent!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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Posts 13631
West Coast

28 posted 2007-10-31 05:29 PM

thank you ms mar...you smile me

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