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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-04-27 06:20 AM


Satisfy Me With Her Kiss

Her fingertips have been know to softy brush
across my lips with sweet desire of
silky bliss in moments of tenderness.
For there comes a time when words
she does not require inorder to
obtain this streetcar named desire.
And thankfully I no longer must
sing for my supper in preparation
or frequent the vast halls of the
well endowed malls for the object
of my desired affection.
For love seems to have obtained
a certain degree of perfection
and now my sweetheart has no other desire
than to satisfy me with her kiss.
As she softy melts into this silky night
with eager arms she holds her sweet
lover tight.

JamesLee
April27
2002



© Copyright 2002 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
tracie66
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1 posted 2002-04-27 06:58 AM


*sigh*
James what a warm, romantic and beautiful piece, much enjoyment was had from this read.
Well penned piece which was a pleasure to read, thanks for sharing
~HUGS~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-04-27 12:32 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I believe there is no feeling happier than holding someone close and crying knowing how special that person is to you! (big hugggsssss) May you always hold true love close, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Aimster
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3 posted 2002-04-27 01:22 PM


James...

oh my...this was beautiful...esp the
last line...absolutely perfect! loved
it, I did...wonderful!

take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Marsha
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4 posted 2002-04-27 06:45 PM


James oh my word this is just too too gorgeous, should writing ever be this perfect? Beautiful writing, absolutely beautiful Do you have to really write this well darling heart? Couldn’t you pause in your soaring to the heavens to let some of us lesser mortals join you? No I suppose you can only write as you can.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


catalinamoon
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5 posted 2002-04-27 06:47 PM


James, how happy this is for you. And a beautiful poem, too.
Sandra

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2002-04-28 06:36 PM


James - know of this softness well, just miss it...

BC

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2004-01-27 11:43 PM


Thank you tracie, Noah, Aimster, Marsha, catalinamoon and Bill for the nice resonses...James
JamesMichael
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8 posted 2007-03-30 10:25 PM


I like this...James
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