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Muse of the Heart
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Muse of the Heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Muse of the Heart It passes on augments fantasy On colored wings of ecstasy Lacing strips across the sky Like lattice on an apple pie. Phantom swirls of colored hue That raised a curtain to my view Vista’s to a sight of awe That opened up a dream to more. She netted me with honey hair Tinting gold from everywhere Moistened lips and fingertips That candy coated all my wits. And I was dazed and boldly based Enfolded in this net of grace. Captured by a Cheshire goal That winked inside my open soul. This muse is one of open heart To stay with me and never part [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (05-01-2002 12:56 PM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, I would never have guessed you were talking about a muse. But I do believe the muse has guided your hand in this. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In delight of imagery cast about by 'mused fairy who plays about the honey jars netting close a twinkling star just to see the smile of you just to bring a grin to two... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It pass on augments fantasy On colored wings of ecstasy Lacing strips across the sky Like lattice on an apple pie. =============================== She netted me with honey hair Tinting gold from everywhere Moistened lips and fingertips That candy coated all my wits. And I was dazed and boldly based Enfolded in this net of grace. Captured by a Cheshire goal That winked inside my open soul.*winkiewinkie*  This muse is one of open heart To stay with me and never part ==================================== Lacing strips across the sky Like lattice on an apple pie. She netted me with honey hair Tinting gold from everywhere Moistened lips and fingertips That candy coated all my wits. and those will be the coolest lines and images I will read all day. Sy-babes...ya make me high...ya make me sigh sometimes ya make me cry ... but ya always make me believe I can fly.    ps...hey Stinkylove... how did ya know I drink honey tea too? *L* |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) These are such beautiful honeyed sentiments, sweet friend, you always devote yourself so wonderfully to your Muse in these gorgeous writings, I love them! (big huggssssss) May this muse always make your heart smile, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love. Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy OH MY This is simply stunning writing, utterly utterly stunning. How beautiful the words in this are, the flow is as smooth as silk, the phrasing perfect, and the timing is absolutely spot on. Without a doubt you are the best at capturing a thought in a net of wonder. I should have known when the sunlight came stroking my face with it’s golden light that this morning was going to hold a special Seymour treat, and of course it did. You really are a master of rhyme darling boy, and this is exquisite Do I love this? Yes you know I do    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Keth, Thank you sweet. Sunshine, Delightful response. JM, Flying and sighing on high are OK but I don't know about crying. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky. Love ya Noah, Enjoyed your reply. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mushy Marsha, Your comments are always a delight to read. Utterly utterly enjoyable. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
no worries me Stinkylove.... these are the *winkie* kind of crys... you know...Poetry tears Besides baby...a moth loves a good cry *winkiewinkie* with honey on it. LOL and Raspberry smooches for Randy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You worry about me too much. I took poetic liberty as I do all the time. Thank you Tink Love and Kisses Stink(y) |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Gr8 job Sy. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper Thanks for the gr8 job. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sy, I don't know how you do that. But it sure is good. Wonderful write. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
saved you, to savor, as I knew it would be good, and like the last song you hear, that plays in your mind, I wanted the words that linger today to be sweet ones. And indeed, they are. I knew I could count on you. "netted me with honey hair" sigh, sy! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
well you have some muse there...*s a never-ending rhyming one.. M |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Sey - you ARE lucky to have such a wonderful muse! I think mine must have a bit of devil in her! Cor p.s. first line - take a looksee, think you meant "passes." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Larry C, You do it with a shot of optimism every morning. LOL Thanks for the read. Serenity, You know I do the same thing myself, save the best for last. Thank you Maureen. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne, Thanks I thought you could use either one but I guess passes flows easier. Thanks for the read and you do spark every once in a while. LOL :sqeeze: |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
And, it's a mighty muse you have! I wish that mine was so dazzling and talented. (Right now, mine's a little moody  ) This is truly exquisite, it ranks as one of your best and of course, it's a keeper~ You should submit this to the main site! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound...or a smiling mouth" ~Kahlil Gibran~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (05-01-2002 01:13 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I loved that. Especially the lattice pie and candied wit. Great words, great feeling. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
bsquirrel So you ate all the apple pie and candy. LOL Thank you so much for the read and comment. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Seymour...James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
James, Thank you for the very nice. Sy |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sy, BTW, this finally explains why you are so sweet..."candy coated wits".  It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now if this wasn't a sweet treat from someone who I know is not sugar-coated, but sweet through and through! Imagination is more important that knowledge |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Larry C, The secrets out "candy coated wits" Sharon, Thank you sweet. |
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