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CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

0 posted 2002-04-30 06:11 PM

Standing here
not knowing
which path
is best
to follow
I take
two steps
forward
trip
and
stumble
upon
remembering
falling
in love
with
you...

Now left
alone
afraid
confused
wandering
here
and
there
yearning
for you
to be
with me
as there
is no
other
in my
heart
that I
can say
I truly
love...

Show me
the way
I shall
follow
lead us
towards
a new
tomorrow
return us
to those
moments
of passion
when in
your arms
I completely
surrender...

Kiss away
these tears
I cry
and bring
us back to
yesterday
when mirrored
in each other's
eyes was seen
a twinkling
of our love
that sparkled
brighter
each new
day...

Speak to me
softly
in lullaby
of love
your song
of promise
made
to me
forever
and a day
our hearts
shall beat
in rhythm
together
as destined
to be...

Just don't
leave me
waiting
with
baited
breath
in pirouette
of spiral
twirl
where
thoughts
of us
take control
pulling
tugging
imprisioning
me
in
once
upon
a
time
ago...
*~coco~*

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2002-04-30 06:13 PM

Written like a vortex of love

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

2 posted 2002-04-30 06:16 PM

MUAHHHHH on cheekz2uSweetPoetFriend Interloper...

coco

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2002-04-30 06:45 PM

Coco - an amazing write full of thoughts of your heart...

BC

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

4 posted 2002-04-30 07:11 PM

hiya Bill...
thanx4taking a peak sweetie...
smilesNhugs2uDearFriend...
*~coco~*

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-04-30 08:32 PM

Coco, this is beautiful...I like the presentation and the gift at the very end...we have not seen enough of you, I am glad you have come home...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-04-30 08:36 PM

YAY!!! This is such a dazzling vortex of love and pure emotion, sweet friend, your wonderful words always grace these pages and bring smiles to all our faces! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

7 posted 2002-04-30 09:30 PM

SweetSunShine...
Thank you so verrrrrry much (muaah on cheekz)...
It's extra special4me2take a peak here and find that, Sunshine, my dearPoetFriend, has stopped by to read a poem of sorts that I had written...
Now I must get myself buzzzzzy later2nite and catchup on some sweet poetry reading...

MistletoeAngel,
You my dear just make me giggle with such warmth in the heart you bring2us here it makes all of us lubz ya more...

Muahh on cheekz2u2PoetFriends...
*~coco~*

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

8 posted 2002-05-01 02:37 AM

Lady ... I like your style!

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

9 posted 2002-05-01 03:25 AM

Janette, thank you soooooooooooo much 4that is very sweet of you2say...
Hugs2youPoetFriend
*~coco~*

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2002-05-01 06:27 AM

Enjoyed reading this fantastic write...James

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

11 posted 2002-05-01 08:10 AM

I do like this, I just can't describe the way it affected me, excellent!

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

12 posted 2002-05-01 12:17 PM

James & Eagle1, thank you both4commenting and letting me know you took a peak dearPoetFriends...
It tickles me pink2learn that you enjoyed this poem and I truly hope you know I very much appreciate your sharing of thoughts...
HugsNsmiles2u2Sweethearts...
*~coco~*

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

13 posted 2002-05-01 05:24 PM

PoetFriend Coco. . . your words flow all too wonderfully my friend. . .

excellent. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

David2
Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 407

14 posted 2002-05-01 05:30 PM

Coco,
Your words are mirroring my life just now and it is very comforting to read them. It is as if you have tapped into my psyche. You are doing an excellent job of using poetry to display longing. Your form and word usage are very easy on the eyes. I have loved both of the poems you have recently posted.
David2

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

15 posted 2002-05-01 06:14 PM

Hiya SweetieSven...
Muaah on cheekz dearPoetFriend and I thank you soooo much4your sweet comments2me are always treasured...

David2...
Ya know I just finished reading your poem 'the man' and I'm still in the midst of wiping away the last tear from my eyes (that poem is awesome)...
I'd also like2thank you4your sweet reply2my poem hugz my heart...

Hugs2u2PoetFriends...
*~coco~*

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