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Puppy Love
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Puppy Love |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Two hearts too young to know true love Yet, to them both, so very real Two souls,small spirits from above so confused in what they did feel A touch electric as fingers felt the energies of God’s gift to them wondering what is it that He dealt the water deep, learning to swim A light kiss, so tender a peck from lips and cheeks rosey and red Emotions flying, minds such a wreck the blush of two that deeply spread Puppy love, deep, and very true in the hearts of two barely eight Living eternal as love will do this bond that simply couldn’t wait Decades have come and gone away since that first kiss on softest lips Locked in memory to ever stay Puppy love heart tenderly skips. [This message has been edited by Magnus (04-30-2002 07:12 PM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
i don't think any of us ever forget our "first love." i loved it  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I've had a few times when I tried to look some old girlfriends up...funny thing is I could never find them...one looked me up one time but I was stupid and didn't listen to her plea...James |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
My feeling is things end for a reason, and to live in the past is to be dead to the present. But enough of my garbage -- enjoyed the poem. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
ah puppy love...we all experienced it one time or another. You've described it to a T Magnus! I'm saving this to my library well done |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
This lil puppy still loves puppy love. I never want to be an old dog. LOL... Great poem! ((Magnus)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo cute, sweet friend, I love my sweet Joanna so so much and whenever I think of her, I always have that special feeling inside, dreaming of the day I'll meet her and kiss her! (big hugggssssss) This is so lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I feel very old smiles coming on, and the kiss of a first blush...thank you for this gentle reminder...when innocence spoke with hearts not yet jaded... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy this is awesome, truly exceptional writing. That first love, ahhh so sweetly innocent it all is. I love it utterly utterly love it. You again have excelled darling boy, you really are a master at this, capturing the words and pinning them to the page. Absolutely first class, you really are a very very fine writer. As I’ve mentioned once of maybe twice. Utterly utterly excellent writing  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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