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David2
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0 posted 2002-04-28 10:30 PM


On The 14th Of February

What woman would I have had I the choice
Of beauties past or present, dreamt or real?
Would I fall prey to Prosperina's voice
Or would to Helen's fairness humbly kneel?
What symphony of sweetness would I seek
To see as every wish personified?
What thoughts would shape a lover so unique
Who'd proffer such perfection long denied?
I know her taste, I smell her sweet perfume,
Her image lives as memories possessed.
It must not errant be to safe presume
I am a man above all others blessed.

For you, my love, are all my needs and more,
You fuel the fire that burns within my core.



© Copyright 2002 David William La Belle - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-28 10:39 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is such a gorgeous poem of true love at Valentines Day and every other day, sweet friend, I know she will always be blessed by this and will always love you forever! (sigh) you have been greatly missed here, sweet friend, I hope you post here ore often, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet David, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-04-29 10:12 PM


Hello David

This was beautiful and very much enjoyed.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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3 posted 2002-04-30 01:54 AM


Very cool....am compelled to bump!


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4 posted 2002-04-30 01:24 PM


David you are a sonnet master.... and a true joy to read... This piece just flowed beautifully.

Parker

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5 posted 2002-04-30 02:01 PM


Very nicely done
She must have melted when she read this

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6 posted 2002-04-30 09:15 PM


Very beautiful!  It's good to read your poetry again.
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7 posted 2002-04-30 09:53 PM


Her image lives as memories possessed.
It must not errant be to safe presume
I am a man above all others blessed.
For you, my love, are all my needs and more,
You fuel the fire that burns within my core.


hiDavid2, my goodness there is soooooo much beauty in your poem it left this reader in gentle sighs.....
Splendid writing and once again nice2meet ya PoetFriend...
*~coco~*

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