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The First Touch Lasts Forever
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The First Touch Lasts Forever |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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In my day and nightly dreams, our first touch lasts forever. Fingertips caressing tenderly, embossing the moment into deepest memory. Under blue skies of deepest hue, Midnite surrounds you. Two hearts fully aflame, tempered with the knowledge that Love is not a game, but a journey of me and you. Lovedreamers cast aside doubts and fears, wipe away years of tears, as aching arms reach longingly outward, while enfolding the dream within. Celestial nights of blazing Starlight, so incessantly bright it easily captures a wandering Moonbeam. No barriers in sight. Endless dreams of powerful seas wash away all the distance between us, blowing the sands of time into eternal space upon celestial breeze. In my day and nightly dreams the first touch lasts forever. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Kacy~ yes it does....and you brought this to life with much passion, and much heart....  HUGSSS Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautifully done  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A delight to read, Kacy.....the first touch does indeed write that long |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Yes...we always wish it could last longer too. Beautifully written Kacy.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MidniteSun~ 'the first touch lasts forever' I have not read a lovelier thought this day~ Thank you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Lauren, touching smiles to you. Loper, hugs and warm thanks. Balladeer, warm smiles and thanks. Devine one, yes, may they last forever and then some. Marge, thought you might enjoy this forever kind of thought. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kacy, Such a tender romantic poem of important truth. I love the imagery and sentiments.  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kacy, All right...I can't take it! I thought the first touch only lasted as long as your memory!!  It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Larry just has to make a comeback...LOL...all seriousness aside... I like this Kacy...a lot! Thanks! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There are many firsts in life but there are not many compared to when the earth moved from the slightest touch. Least we ever forget the way it made us feel. Nice writing Midnitesun~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may your love forever scarf you in the northern colors of love and bring magic to your heart bound to last forever! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, Larry, you touch me, heart and soul.  You never could keep your hands in your pockets, could you? Sunshine, so glad you enjoyed this one. Larry is funny. Bluesy gal, thanks! Yes, that old Carly Simon song was right on the mark. "I feel the earth, move..." Noah, hugs to you sweet friend, you are always so kind. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (04-30-2002 11:34 PM).] |
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