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He took Clay
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He took Clay |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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He took Clay Just a block common stock with key unlocked a vision of something from nothing looked within saw love feather of dove sun above thinking of her smile hands molded twisted and folded sculpted and sighed passion grew from nothing made something looked within felt love clay formed with breath and depth and desire he so aspired to lift love higher to church spire from clay’s mire of nothing to something looked within made love just a block common stock with key unlocked his vision and gave her life ~*~ repost |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Ooohhhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, this is a very interesting way of looking at passion and love for someone develop, almost as though a heart is constantly in the making and love forms a palace when love occupies it! (big hugggssssss) This is a wonderful artistic gem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
An intriguing repost Kari.....What one can do with a simple block of clay....form into a beauty... How many have done that over the centuries...??? Mayhaps a few? |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Fantastic, what an interesting poem. Sandra |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I'm glad you reposted this. I don't think I saw it before. This is very good. I really like it. |
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Casanova Junior Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 48Mays Landing NJ |
I like the flow of this piece, but I like the words most of all. keep it up! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karilea, Thank you so much for the repost. What inspiration! And I'd have missed it. Very well done. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
He took a hundred pounds of clay And then He said, "Hey listen" I'm gonna fix this world today Because I know what's missin' Then He rolled his big sleeves up And a brand new world began He created a woman and lots of lovin' for a man...oooh yes he did~ I enjoyed your poem so much Sunshine. Your words reminded me of a treasure I had once hoped to find and how easily the mold is cast, only to be set on fire!!! |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Uplifting write! Shenachie |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sunshine.. enjoyed this well done ms |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sunshine, I really enjoyed this form of poetry indeed. From the clay you have formed a vision, uplifting our inspiration to a higher level. I enjoyed the read, thank you. Sincerely Rick |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea Interesting and beautiful! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I'll always have respect for someone who can take wet earth and shape it into a liveable form. Not one of my skills. Loved your clay of words. And damn if that didn't inspire me again... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Beautiful !!... |
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