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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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You are my sister planet, shrouded by cloud cover the name of an exotic plant where fly bait hovers; rise out of the ocean deep in the mouth of a clam point out stories of beauty secrets across lands. Venus second to rotate around my sun your fly trap functions are cued to one; catch occasional winged insects that alight no need for planters to fear or fright. Roman goddess of love, man searches in futility goddess of spring, followed by fertility; infant son shoots arrows poisoned with passion around godly courts, love and hate had opposed fashions. Rivaled by the greeks and their Aphrodite femininity and affection rivaled the mighty risen out of the depths in the mouth of a clam images of what women want to be, lies in your hands. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (04-28-2002 08:37 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  WOW!!! I just love the versatile feel of your writings, sweet friend, you depict Aphrodite so wonderfully in this poem. She is one of my favorite goddesses to research and she always inspires some of my poems. (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fantastic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Noah, yes she is a favorite, after all she doesn't just mean love but creativity and affection |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Martin darling boy Ohhhhhhh how I love this piece of yours it has style it has grace it flows across the page with perfection. Its timing is excellent, as are the words. So skilfully woven in hues of wonder. Excellent writing. You are right darling heart we are writing in tandem this evening.  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The pearl... A different kind of write for you, and worn well. Such character and strike. ThisDiamond |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Martin, you have penned this beautifully! I really enjoyed this change in style for you. May we see more of this venue? ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You combine the elements in the most wonderful way ecrivan and relay your message with such beauty. *applause* |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Marsha, maybe its the full moon..hehe Diamond, just a change from the too serious stuff..does me well |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Blues, I think I've surprised you all...that's good! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Nancy, Yes you may see more my enchanted friend, but will I be as "flowing" as I am in the socio-political writes..that's the challenge |
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