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Open wound
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Open wound |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Angry are the pages bare and insecure are the words sacrificed upon thoughts stake ringing the bell asking for assistance wanting to end it elastic sky stretches the endless appeal of passive submissive when i should be grasping i am clawing dismissing what is natural process Peeling back this layer new flesh springs to mind open repair of messy wound. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Hmmm must read more Thomas |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gemma! i love this! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
gemma you're a goddess post more I'm hungry |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wonderful imagry. And very powerful! Eric |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Sometimes you just have to nurse the wound and study it in order to get to the fundamentals of the pain and know how to ease it! (sad sigh) This is well-expressed, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love the imagery Gemma Cold hands means a warm heart |
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