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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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A silent scream emptying a soul upon a blank page evidence of the slow decay that rusts a child into a mangled man(?) ____________________________________________________ Sorry folks, I'm just an absolutely miserable #@$& lately... [This message has been edited by Aenimal (02-27-2003 12:38 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It's okay Raph you're not alone, and more power to you for typing it out! No one walks in your shoes, no one!!!! Don't you ever apologize. careful hugs~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
its more fun to kick the computer screen instead |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
The frustration is shared by all at one time or the other |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wish I could do something for you Raphael  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Aenimal You can change mangled to spangled. LOL enjoyed. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Raph, me too, sometimes.  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
thanks.. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
the slow decay that rusts a child into a mangled man HOW do you think of these things?  as usual, sets off priceless images in me head. keeping this. the use of rusting. beautifully effective. gives me an image of passing time, and damage to a humans metal exterior. lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
That was really cool. I loved it! the Wind is invisible. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
many more thanks and twice to vandana |
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