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corey14
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0 posted 2003-02-26 10:33 PM



In love and I can not see it
Right in front of my eyes and I let it slip
Some times I just want to quit
Leave the fake smiles
And all that’s not true
Yet I only want to be with you

That something special about you
A light glowing inside me
Every day it grows brighter
That I wish you could see
I can not say a thing
But I have to show
The only way I know


I Love you.

live a little everyday and when its all over you will have lived a lot

i have one but i cant think of it

© Copyright 2003 corey baker - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-26 10:36 PM


This is beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-02-27 12:13 PM




(sigh) Oh Corey, this is lovely, sweet friend, that is the best way to express love not to mention the easiest! (big hugggsssss) This is precious, sweet friend, I love it, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corey, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-02-27 01:10 PM


beautiful and sad, bittersweet...I enjoyed it
Enchantress
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4 posted 2003-02-27 01:12 PM


Very nicely done...much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

GG
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Lost in thought
5 posted 2003-03-01 12:33 PM


this is sensitive and heartwarming it made me smile.. thank you.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

WhiteRose
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6 posted 2003-03-01 12:38 PM


Very sweet and touching.

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (03-01-2003 12:38 AM).]

Angel
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7 posted 2003-03-01 12:41 PM


Very nice.
Alicethruglass
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8 posted 2003-03-17 06:43 PM


very sweet and simply done
~A~

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2003-03-19 09:14 AM


Tender and very touching...

Peace & Light,
Earth Angel

garysgirl
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10 posted 2003-03-19 09:40 AM


This does really have a lot of
tenderness in it. I hope she knows
how you feel, Corey.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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