Open Poetry #25 |
The only way i know how |
corey14 Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 89Boston, Mass, U.S.A. |
In love and I can not see it Right in front of my eyes and I let it slip Some times I just want to quit Leave the fake smiles And all that’s not true Yet I only want to be with you That something special about you A light glowing inside me Every day it grows brighter That I wish you could see I can not say a thing But I have to show The only way I know I Love you. live a little everyday and when its all over you will have lived a lot |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Corey, this is lovely, sweet friend, that is the best way to express love not to mention the easiest! (big hugggsssss) This is precious, sweet friend, I love it, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corey, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful and sad, bittersweet...I enjoyed it |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely done...much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
this is sensitive and heartwarming it made me smile.. thank you. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Very sweet and touching. [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (03-01-2003 12:38 AM).] |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Very nice. |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
very sweet and simply done ~A~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Tender and very touching... Peace & Light, Earth Angel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This does really have a lot of tenderness in it. I hope she knows how you feel, Corey. "Love makes the world go around" |
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