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Amature2
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0 posted 2003-03-19 09:16 AM



Wonderful Awakening

This morning I was awakened
By the sweetest sound I’ve ever heard
It was the sound of your voice
You sang me a lullaby
The tune is still floating in my head
I will keep replaying throughout my day
Thank you for a wonderful awakening
Soon to you the same song I will sing

"This we know - the Earth does not belong to man - man belongs to the Earth." Chief Seattle

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deleeme
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1 posted 2003-03-19 09:53 AM


I am happy to be among the first to relpy to this lovely Love poem.  So much of the poems are written of a soured love, gone wrong, with the deep hurt that accompanies such--and for many that is a haersh reality.  But it is refreshing, to read of a love on the right path, headed in the right direction--and the beautiful awareness of the euphoric state of such possession of it.
Today, my wife and I celebrate 32 years of life together.  It hasn't always been easy, or an effortless pleasure-- but we can certainly say, it has been one of life's greatest blessings-- May many years hence you say and acknowledge the same.
God Bless you,
  david

Every Day's a Blessing
And Gift-Wrapped from Above,
Share it with another
And Spread the Father's Love!!!

May You come to Know His Best Blessing

[This message has been edited by deleeme (03-19-2003 10:01 AM).]

littlewing
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2 posted 2003-03-19 10:17 AM


Amature - this is just lovely - what beautiful writing - ohhhh ho wnice to wak eup to such beauty . . . xxoo
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3 posted 2003-03-19 10:27 AM


Amature2, I really love this. It's nice to
read of tender love. Thank you for sharing.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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