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The Wave, The Ocean...And What Follows
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The Wave, The Ocean...And What Follows |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
I wait for you. This anticipation is the wave to the coming of your ocean - I ride the crest of our desires. And crash to the weight of your embrace. Laying in your arms...I feel the sudden pull from your tide once more. I live only for the next wave. And what follows. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love the imagery. I thought it was just beautiful. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Amazingly clear and beautiful... the words leaving a wonderful image in the mind, etched upon the heart. What a talented artist you are. Thank you for sharing such profound beauty... I love you, Moca |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Eric~ This is truly beautiful. I very much enjoyed the read.  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Eric, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your lovely words do! (big hugggssssss) Always embrace the ocean with glee, sweet friend, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
you pull the tide in which I ride |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
A really romantic write! Really like it! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Loved the imagery here.... Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Ooooooooohhhhh! another beautifully sensual poem ericc!!! Laying in your arms...I feel the sudden pull from your tide once more. wow! much love, gemma xxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I am still riding the intoxicating waves of your mellifluous, mellodious words of love... Love & Light, Earth Angel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful write! great stuff! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Don't know how I missed this sensually romantic poem of yours, Eric. This is beautiful. I'm glad it got bumped back. "Love makes the world go around" |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I really enjoyed the subtle motion in this~ kind of like a slow sail. Nice Ericc~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
An ocean of passion .... that transcends time and space. Your phenomenal words gave me a wave of pleasure ... Love, Margherita |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Eric..I felt the pull of the tide in this.. wonderfully sensual. ~Hugs~ ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Excellent write!! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ericc - my goodness - one after another - these belong ina book by themselves - truly xxoo |
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Etain Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 92The moon... |
I love tne intensity of your words, they fill my heart with longing. Beautiful! Love, Etain |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Beautiful expression Ericc... *~coco~* |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
very beautiful write ericc hugs, kelly |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Whoa, very sensuous. Surf's up! Cor |
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