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I SHALL MOVE ON
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I SHALL MOVE ON |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Cobblestone turns to dirt and dirt to sand. The sun scorches, then leaves the air to the bitter cold. My common sense over ruled by my intense passion. The storms beat upon my chest and blinds my eyes to the path set before me. I shall ware my feet to their limit To travel distances not meant for man to walk. I will sail where even the wildest rivers fear to run through. The unfaithfulness of the night, claims the day And screams it's silence into my ears. But unscaled mountains will rue the day They met the likes of me. For i pass with ease athwart their lofty peaks. Wearied, yet I do not cease until my rest is upon your shoulders. My devotion knows no restraints and fears no boundaries And true to my word, Until I have felt your fire burn within mine and I am joined with you.... I SHALL MOVE ON |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Albert, I know with all my heart that your golden heart is bound to have true love forever, as you are so deserving of it and her fire of loving faith will be just as briht as yours! (big hugggsssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I send angel hugs of comfort out to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Albert, thank you for sharing!  Mya love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love this piece. it is awesome. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Albert, this poem did touch my heart. I could feel the tenderness in it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what an ending! you're good at those power-packed endings |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Garys: i am sooo glad my words touched you! Passing: Thank you for the kind words. I have been told that my endings are powerful. Sort of like a suprise ending. I guess if enough people tell you something....  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Where was I when this was first posted? Oh yeah, sulking in a corner someplace..... but I've moved on, eh? Good work. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
THANK YOU Ratleader!!!! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You certainly wove and twisted this and the ending was grat! |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
a wordweaver...that's what you are *s and a very fine one. ~A~ |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very beautiful. Eric |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! So very very beautiful! ~Smiles, hugs and a vote~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Albert: You know I always love your words. This struck me especially close. ~hugs~ Hope to read more of you soon, this definitly gets my vote. I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Tender, touching, TERRIFIC!!!  Peace & Love, EA |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hi Albert I really enjoyed this one and it most definitely has my vote. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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