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Zephyr
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Zephyr |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Zephyr You are different from what one is used to keeping house below time and a thistle in your wild shoes over wild roots where love has fallen over wounded ground. You are of summer mature, warm rarer than wealth in this age of the mad-man of hatred and greed. You are of none of these but an architect of peace a cathedral of dreams and like a gentle breeze you came to me down under the bend of fall weaving your life around mine binding poems into my hair [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (02-16-2003 02:56 PM).] |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
This is just beautiful... I can't say much more than that. Very serene and peaceful. Truly a work of art worthy of a place in Reflections. I would vote but, you didn't check the box that lets people vote so I'm going to wait for you to come back and add that... you can do it in the edit screen. Hurry up now, don't keep us waiting.  Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
this has your skill written all over it... bravo... i wanna vote!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"weaving your life around mine binding poems into my hair" beautiful.....just beautiful... no book submission??? pout. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Please submit this,it is beautiful. Jason |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
An enchantment! "Binding poems into my Hair"...I love this line! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
maree, beautiful writing, i read it when it was posted in 24..but wanted to respond again. i hope you do post this for the book, i surely will vote! as always your writing is nothing short of amazing! love ya. amy  p.s. i'll write you a snail mail letter soon. bye for now "love is like a butterfly-- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 Bravo! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Heh, hi all... thanks so much for your lovely comments and compliments.. ahem this IS supposed to be for the book submission LOL... seems I had a bit of a DUR morning. I only just posted this in open 24 lol last week. nodding head sigh. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
binding poems in my hair. IWIHWT.Fabulous images. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Maree, I just had to read to this again as I love zephyrs and this truly is a breath of fresh air to the reader! (kiss on cheek) You too have my vote for this, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maree, thnak you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-16-2003 03:45 PM).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautiful!! Charisma |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree...voting here...wish someone would bind poems into my hair...what a lovely thought you have written!  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely thoughts here! Cor |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I replied to your fist posting of this...and am no less impressed upon reading it here...which makes about the 8th time I have visited it... excellent work... |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
may i say....sigh?? |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
you got my vote sweetie...  K |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
and like a gentle breeze you came to me down under the bend of fall weaving your life around mine binding poems into my hair ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ such passion filled words....... bravo ~~ Connie ~~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Dark Angel - one of the best I've read of yours, my vote for sure... BC |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
edited and ready for voting... yep...gotta be one to represent you in the book. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Well Mmy, knowing how I love this poem, you know I had to come vote for it. Best wishes M'friend JThere is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
This is beautiful, Maree. I absolutely LOVE it. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
it's okay...I've actually been tracking you. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
binding poems... hmmmmmm --- lovely writing... really, really admire your writing skills, my friend regards, sudhir |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic feelings woven in...James |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you all so very much for your kind replies, compliments and support. hugs Maree |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"and like a gentle breeze you came to me down under the bend of fall weaving your life around mine binding poems into my hair" how soft and thoughtful |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Yes!! This is so beautiful! One for the book for sure! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I agree with everyone else...a very beautiful book submission....  Hugs. Ethel |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I thought that I had just read this... Reads just as nice now. A lovely write Maree. Ed "The shortest distance between two points is.....sometimes intolerable" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am SO glad you picked this as one to enter for the book, I have read it a couple of times before as I have it printed into a book of others work from Passions and I appreciate your the art of your craft so much on this one, and it certainly gets my vote. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
voting |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
.....me too.......a definate for the book. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
This is excellence from the first stirring image to the last. When you think you have heard it all, |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Dark Angel, No time to read thirty-three replies, so I'll just say ditto, and add that though I'm not much for un-structured verse, I found this very appealing. Doc |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
enjoyed  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very talented indeed.... Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Got my vote, love it. Titia |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Pretty and tough at the same time, like the season(s) you describe, and the lover(s) kept therein. I know it's over. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and like a gentle breeze you came to me down under the bend of fall weaving your life around mine binding poems into my hair I, too loved these words...they are like a gentle breeze~ soft and warm M |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
you know...I have read this several time..and keep coming back to it from time to time... each read as good as the first..and each time shaking me head... wondering if I am ever going to grow up and write like this.. it is good... very good... and I have to say so again... |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Just making sure I get my vote in for this one!  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you all so very much for your wonderful replies, for stopping by and for your support. hugs Maree |
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