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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Have you ever caught the wind Cupped in hand to hear its song Heard the message it did send To know the meaning of belong Has the sun warmed the face With outstretched arms to the sky Drifting in dreams with slow pace Til the spirit soars on high Did moonbeamed lane beckon you on The peace of night on footsteps light Slivers of silver taking to dawn Bringing new day from caress of night Do seasons pass on fleeting wings Borne on the winds that never still Do you listen when it sings Of the sorrow and the thrill Do you wonder why you are When wind whispers in your ear For now is then and yet so far From hidden smile and silent tear |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Logan, this is beautiful, sweet friend, yes, I have heard it and I know this feeling of stillness of heart and the music of the soul ever so much! (big hugggssssss) We must captivate the wind and let it breathe through our lungs like a shaman's flute, God Bless You, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Logan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
It seems as if this poem means that, someone that has there emotions changed constant. As if the wind just blows them into different pieces, or perhaps the wind just brings things back together? I dunno. All I know is that this was very enjoyed, and yo did a good job. You deserve my vote! Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
but...of course... as ever was... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yes. *S* I just couldn't explain it. *S* This is excellent! *S* |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Logan...so good to see you...and yes to all the questions and the voting square, as well.  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Definitely one for the book! Hope you are well, friend, and spring winds are set to blow gently your way. Cor |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Greatly enjoyed ..... I heard the song of the wind. Margherita |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
The answer is 'yes' dear Logan... ...as ever was...  ~Gentle smiles and tender hugs, Leighgirl~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Logan, this is simply beautiful and belongs in the book for sure. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I liked it all but LOVED the last verse.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Have you ever caught the wind Cupped in hand to hear its song Heard the message it did send To know the meaning of belong =================================== Did moonbeamed lane beckon you on The peace of night on footsteps light Slivers of silver taking to dawn Bringing new day from caress of night Do seasons pass on fleeting wings Borne on the winds that never still Do you listen when it sings Of the sorrow and the thrill =================================== Can you see me smiling from there??? This is SUCH A COOL poem!!!!!!! and HAS to be next to your name in the book!! When I was reading this I was reminded of our "fairy" duet and how much fun it was rhyming with you... love the heart and wisdom of this one Logan...rhymes divine...DIVINE |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
You show both the power and gentility of the winds and bring them to life. Kudos! When you think you have heard it all, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh Keeper~ This one surely is !  *Huglets* ~*LittleGoose*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Thank you, Noah, for your kindness of thought. I appreciate your support as always…gentle smile Thank you, Connel for the read and your kind comments…gentle smile Ahhh, Sissie, you are always the Sunshine with your words…very gentle smile Glad you liked it, Suthern, but then, your work is always the excellent one..very gentle smile Martie, very gentle smile, I am glad that you were here and had a yes to the questions. Someday, I might come partways to your verses Ahh, Cor, hon, as always your presence means the world. I hope all is going your way on the wind also…very gentle smile Margherita, yes, the wind song is a melody to always hear. Thank you for being here…very gentle smile Leighgirl, very gentle smile. Thank you for gracing these pages Chris thank you for the kind words. I am glad you enjoyed..gentle smile Vandana. Your comments are always the sweetness of the flower..very gentle smile Poet, ahhh, thank you. You are very kind to say so…very gentle smile Dear, dear JM..Thank you for all, especially for giving me the opportunity to duet with a Master..hmmm, MOTH? Nah, never, hmm, I know it starts with a M…ahhh, Monarch..that was it…very gentle smile..Please know, it was a highlight of my life to have had the fairy duet. I thought of that when the verse of the night came out..another very gentle smile Chanson, thank you, for the wind is always alive with me…gentle smile Ahhh, Little Goose. It does me good to see you here. Thank you with a hug and a very gentle smile Thank all of you for the kindness of being here and for all the support you give by so doing...very gentle smile |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Did moonbeamed lane beckon you on The peace of night on footsteps light Slivers of silver taking to dawn Bringing new day from caress of night *************************************** Those are my favorite lines, Logan. And yes, my spirit has been caressed within those silver shafts of night light. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Logan it is so good to see your words again my poet friend, and most definately this is worthy of print....I love it. I must have had my momma's will |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Yes, I have been beckoned down the moonlit lane. And any other lane I see. I love the images you created in this one, and the images it caused me to remember. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You know I feel this one and know it well. I voted for you, now just will wait to see it in there. Stay well. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Logan Good one, you have my vote. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I love your wind song! ~ May the wind revitalize you and carry away all stress and negativity in your life... Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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machiner Member
since 2003-03-13
Posts 67MA, US |
Thanks for that. machiner |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Returning for another verse. *S* |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
too many lines to pick a favorite(although I am partial to the moon) but I must add, your words are not shared enough M |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Logan, Enjoyed this much.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Look what a gentle wind just blew into my open door! This is so beautiful, Logan, I'm keeping a copy of it in my personal favorites file, to read again and again. Thank you. Namaste, and Great Peace to you. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I just like the idea of cupping the wind. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is really good.....Ya know the wind to me holds many secrets in it's whisper!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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