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Tears Enough
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Tears Enough |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
What of this dread that all will end Before dawns new light of day Before my gathering work, undone Or with my children, boundless play And when I consider intimate, Simple pleasures, so desperate attune With all those nights I dream of your touch While roses, unattended still bloom And I fear the dark hours nearing When I imagine your sweet charms no more Or speak these words, but for only your ears "My dear, I love you!" Then at the cold door Of eternity stand, and forever alone, I cry Till tears enough the oceans fill, And wash all the clouds from the sky Rf |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'With all those nights I dream of your touch While roses, unattended still bloom' Some great lines in this Rf, and the heart, of course... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Of eternity stand, and forever alone, I cry Till tears enough the oceans fill, And wash all the clouds from the sky" I loved the theme, and in particular the above lines. Very nicely done. Susan |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
'tis a briny tale...and mine own eyes doth add to the depths of thine ocean blue... ~ Warm hugs, EA |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
thanks for above kindness! one of my more "typical" poems, true...but enjoyed this one much in the writing. Rf |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so much to do, so little time... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Robert, I hope soon the tears you cry will be the ones of joy and will have rainbows come sprouting out everywhere reflecting the roses and daisies! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Right from the heart Robert - love this. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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