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Last Chance
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Last Chance |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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Last Chance(2/26/03 JDC) You came to me after prolonged silence And asked me to stay the night I politely declined You said last chance I asked you to define For tonight, was your reply I am so scared of you My fear is tangible Because I am weak You know I love you Which makes me fear your intentions I don’t know what to believe |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Susan, Good write, believe in yourself. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very good piece! Trust your feelings and believe in yourself! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Listen, really listen to that little voice (not the big one) and you will know exactly what to believe... Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and you know I can relate... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Dixie, I know...oh how I know. Susan |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Fear can be such a costly thing, it's the main test of love I believe and the challenge is to share that fear with him and he'll either be sympathetic in understanding and promise to make you feel comfortable to the best of his ability or not understand then you know where your love will go! (sad sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, this is touching, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you Noah, that was a very sweet reply. Susan |
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