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Dejection
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Dejection |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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Found this in my personal achieves....geez I was a mess!! My dreams are haunted My anguish complete My love unspoken My once constant tears, deplete Solitude has become my best friend and enemy Loneliness my reluctant companion My darkness is self-induced, yet so unwanted My fears are what drive me Each morning brings despair for how I spent the night before Alone with my music and candle light Behind my steel door I get up each morning and flinch at my own reflection So surprised at the depth of my sorrow Wondering how I got to a place of such dejection |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
It's a place that many have shared with you, my friend...a place where you hit bottom, only to learn more about yourself and grow in ways that you don't even realize at the time! This is an introspective write, and a very fine one...it shows that life is not always bright, but it also gives the impression that the dejection can be overcome! Appreciated this insight! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen! ~~S~~ |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Its hard sometimes to figure out how we get to the stage we are at. Usually reasons behind the loneliness and pain become muddled. Very good job expressing this |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very good expressive piece! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I sure can relate! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) I too can suprise me how low I can go too, to the point when I was young I almost gave up my life, but then when I faced the Lord, I now understand I just got too hard on myself, I should love myself first as that is the most important thing, of course I didn't get it the first minute but I studied how to do so now I have brought myself back up again and I believe if you do the same and find your inner-confidence, you will be back on your feet and will soon enough fly! (sad sigh) I send angel hugs your way, dearest friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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