Blue Stars and Ten Thousand More

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Open Poetry #25

Blue Stars and Ten Thousand More

GoldenIllusions111
Junior Member

since 2003-02-25

Posts 18

0 posted 2003-02-26 11:08 AM

When they fall and touch my skin
a dance of lions sing
lightly, like the touch
of silk midnights
in a great vivid ocean of laughter
drowning in wine
for a thousand miles and
ten thousand more,
hurry while I sleep there
next to a moonlight blue.

I promise to catch up,
I promise,
hurry, while my name
is written
all over your body,
hurry.

This sky of blue stars
is falling in a night of
candy blankets
and ten thousand more.

Golden*

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-02-26 11:13 AM

GoldenIllusions111
You have a style of your own, enjoyed.

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

2 posted 2003-02-26 11:19 AM

"I promise to catch up,
I promise,
hurry, while my name
is written
all over your body,
hurry."

i like! as Sy mentioned, you have a style all your own - keep it up!

Rf

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-02-26 12:13 PM

This fine poetic work is definitely golden!
Truly a delight to read and envision.

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

GoldenIllusions111
Junior Member

since 2003-02-25

Posts 18

4 posted 2003-02-26 12:16 PM

SY...Thank you so much .

Golden*

Robert..I am so pleased you enjoyed this write and your very warm compliments.

Golden*

Angel.....Thanks so much, really how kind of you!

Golden*

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-02-26 12:48 PM

a beautiful scene captured on screen!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-02-26 12:59 PM

(smiles) Yay!!! Oh my gosh, I envisioned the candy sky in this, this is beautiful, I wish I could really taste the sky like a Jolly Rancher, the imagery in this is gorgeous! (big hugggsssss) May the sky fall down on you but gently like a velvet blanket, sweet friend, this is breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

GoldenIllusions111
Junior Member

since 2003-02-25

Posts 18

7 posted 2003-02-26 01:40 PM

Noah......again I am so honored by your words poet....Thank you so very much!

Golden*

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