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Take Me
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Take Me |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
...Another old one... Take Me Take all of My love Live in My dreams Hold my hand Understand Who I am Link to my heart And never let go. Let our love flow For Always Sing with me Our destiny And lay forever With me In our pool of love. I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
The last three verses did it for me! If i were the reciever of this poem, I would do exactly as it says. A lucky person indeed, who gets to hear your heart sing such beautiful tunes. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is romantic, beautiful and full of warmth. I really enjoyed it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
KoKo Indeed this would warm me no end, enjoyed. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Thank you all so much.  It feels strange to be showered with compliments...but thank you so very much I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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