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KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2003-02-15 09:27 PM


...Another old one...

Take Me

Take all of
My love
Live in
My dreams

Hold my hand
Understand
Who I am

Link to my heart
And never let go.
Let our love flow
For Always

Sing with me
Our destiny

And lay forever
With me
In our pool of love.

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

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Albert J. Allie
Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512
Queens NY
1 posted 2003-02-15 10:41 PM


The last three verses did it for me! If i were the reciever of this poem, I would do exactly as it says. A lucky person indeed, who gets to hear your heart sing such beautiful tunes.
the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-02-15 10:42 PM


This is romantic, beautiful and full of warmth. I really enjoyed it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2003-02-15 10:55 PM


KoKo
Indeed this would warm me no end, enjoyed.

KoKo
Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow
4 posted 2003-02-15 11:50 PM


Thank you all so much. It feels strange to be showered with compliments...but thank you so very much

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2003-04-20 04:11 PM


Lovely...James
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